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[aid] => mick
[title] => I want to quit.
[time] => 2008-11-18 17:25:03
[hometext] => This is for anyone who just wants to give up on everything.
[bodytext] => So im sat here. In complete dispair. I want to quit, re-admit the mistakes i've made. Messing up my lifes my trade. So sucessful i should start a company. And take the world by storm. But for the minute i'll sit here on my own. In pitch black. Comforting me when i close my eyes. Watch as everything goes away. This anestetic blackness takes over me. Dreaming and sleeping is the only time i get a break. And even then they haunt me while i sleep. No chance at redempetion. So that i'll not mention. I'd rather dwell here in my mind. To prove how broken down i am. My drive has gone and the lights are fading. More spaced out then being with the stars. So i gaze out of my window. And realise the world doesnt end right here. To move is going to take some effort. So carefully i'll think my ways through. But i know i'll mess them up like i always do. If i could rewind time then i think i would. But thats not possible and i know it. So upset i put this fake smile on so i dont have to show it. This mask begins to crack the frown is slighty on backwards. And my eyes are going darker. The colours fading because im wearing it too much. People start to realise but i start to hush. Moving further and futher into my corner. So im sat here. In dispair. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 13 [informant] => liamleash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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