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The life I carry can't explain to you why I cry.
My sister she hates me and pretends that she cares.
My mom doesn't bother, this, I haven't a clue why.
I hate myself for bringing a life in his world.
A baby to suffer endlessly, and that will cry so many nights.
Sometimes I really do wish I died.
I wake in the morning and pray to not cry.
Simply because now my life is not my own.
If I die today my baby will suffer, what so sadly is the same fate as me.
So I try to take it one day at a time.
I try to see the light at the end.
But for some reason it is getting very dim.
I pray to God "Let me be a GOOD MOTHER"
Even if my baby doesn't have a father. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 48 [informant] => cryingonmyporch [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

God let me be a good mother

Contributed by cryingonmyporch on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The life I carry doesn't know this pain.
The life I carry can't explain to you why I cry.
My sister she hates me and pretends that she cares.
My mom doesn't bother, this, I haven't a clue why.
I hate myself for bringing a life in his world.
A baby to suffer endlessly, and that will cry so many nights.
Sometimes I really do wish I died.
I wake in the morning and pray to not cry.
Simply because now my life is not my own.
If I die today my baby will suffer, what so sadly is the same fate as me.
So I try to take it one day at a time.
I try to see the light at the end.
But for some reason it is getting very dim.
I pray to God "Let me be a GOOD MOTHER"
Even if my baby doesn't have a father.

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Re: God let me be a good mother (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 06:22:54 PM AEST
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when i was 16,,my parents didnt want me,,i left them for 16 yrs,,they didnt like it ,,they changed there way and grew up them self,,they will come to there sense's ,,believe,,a friend in words,,spooky

Re: God let me be a good mother (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 07:38:34 AM AEST
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I am sure you will be a wonderful mother. Just use your past bad experiences and learn from them. Let your child know that you love it no matter what and you will be a fantastic mother.

sleepless_siren

Re: God let me be a good mother (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 04:33:28 PM AEST
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I have no doubts you will be a good mother, The simple fact that you are intelligent enough to ask god for help convinces me of it. Well done and God bless

Re: God let me be a good mother (User Rating: 1 )
by Sara on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:49:06 PM AEST
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i agree with the others.....
Many babies don't have fathers and they turn out wonderfully... You'll be alright.. God'll see to it!
<3 Sara

Re: God let me be a good mother (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 10:51:28 PM AEST
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This Is Sad. I Have Two Brothers And I Have No Sisters I Wouldn't Mind Having One

Re: God let me be a good mother (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 01:13:45 AM AEST
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This is good but Its painful

Re: God let me be a good mother (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 03:00:40 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem. It shows how much you want to be a good mother. I am sure that you will be a good mother, just have faith.

ShadowsCLoud

Re: God let me be a good mother (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 01:25:52 AM AEST
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YOU WILL BE A GOOD MOTHER AND I SAID I WOULD BE THERE BY YOUR SIDE NO MATTER WHAT YOU ARE MY BEST FRIEND
CHANTEL

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