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Array ( [sid] => 145873 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Look At Me [time] => 2008-10-23 22:15:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Look at me

Look at my mouth,
the little up-curve at the ends;

Look at my hair
the way I flip it when I talk;

Look at what I wear
some of it is for you.

Notice how I smell.

Notice my shaved legs
and the birthday card on the shelf;

Come close to me;
lean in when we talk.

Touch my face sometimes.

Notice the brown specks
in my green eyes;

touch me
when I walk by;

And laugh a little
for no reason
when you say hello.

Look at me
at odd times
from across the room.

Back into me at parties
expecting a hug
from behind

And thank you love

cause you do all this

all the time. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lnnie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Look At Me

Contributed by lnnie on Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 10:15:31 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Look at me

Look at my mouth,
the little up-curve at the ends;

Look at my hair
the way I flip it when I talk;

Look at what I wear
some of it is for you.

Notice how I smell.

Notice my shaved legs
and the birthday card on the shelf;

Come close to me;
lean in when we talk.

Touch my face sometimes.

Notice the brown specks
in my green eyes;

touch me
when I walk by;

And laugh a little
for no reason
when you say hello.

Look at me
at odd times
from across the room.

Back into me at parties
expecting a hug
from behind

And thank you love

cause you do all this

all the time.

Copyright © lnnie ... [ 2008-10-23 22:15:31]
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Re: Look At Me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 12:46:14 AM AEST
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sounds like love, nice

Michelle

Re: Look At Me (User Rating: 1 )
by jesusofholland on Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 11:28:58 PM AEST
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Wow, what a lucky guy. Great write. It seems this is all many women want, for us to notice the little things. I learned this the hard way.

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