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Array ( [sid] => 145744 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken [time] => 2008-10-17 10:16:42 [hometext] => Unrequited love can be the worst. [bodytext] => Where's the morphine baby?
The pain is setting in
Seems like this love will always win
I can't let go, I can't say I don't love you so
This hopeless unrequited love, this feeling
Is tearing me apart
And as time wears on, it breaks my heart
The memories rip at me
Bringing me to my knees

So many times
I just want to get up and run
Run towards the horizon, towards the sun
Maybe it's light will blind me to all that's around me
Maybe I wouldn't have to turn back around and see
The cruel reality thats eats and eats at me

So as night falls
I'll hear my heart call
Out to you
But like something you always do
You'll never hear it [comments] => 2 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 2 [informant] => the_young_poet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Broken

Contributed by the_young_poet on Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 10:16:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Where's the morphine baby?
The pain is setting in
Seems like this love will always win
I can't let go, I can't say I don't love you so
This hopeless unrequited love, this feeling
Is tearing me apart
And as time wears on, it breaks my heart
The memories rip at me
Bringing me to my knees

So many times
I just want to get up and run
Run towards the horizon, towards the sun
Maybe it's light will blind me to all that's around me
Maybe I wouldn't have to turn back around and see
The cruel reality thats eats and eats at me

So as night falls
I'll hear my heart call
Out to you
But like something you always do
You'll never hear it

Copyright © the_young_poet ... [ 2008-10-17 10:16:42]
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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Lovingangel4u on Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 01:01:11 PM AEST
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I really like how you expressed your feelings in this poem. Well done.
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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by outlawpoet on Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 02:46:52 PM AEST
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this was a good write i totally dig the story and feel your pain you could maybe clean it up a little bit and simplify it and keep the same message but its a good write please return the favor and read my latest poem

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