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Array ( [sid] => 145295 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => We're Done [time] => 2008-09-21 02:12:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I said I loved you.
You said you loved me, too.
But not a word you told me was true.
It was all a lie.
And you said it all, looking me in the eye.

You know I’ve been through Hell,
You know how many times I’ve fell.
So tell me,
How could you hurt me this badly?
After you knew what I’d been through?
I trusted you.
And you let me down.
Now I really hope I can leave this damn town.
There’s nothing for me here.
Because the one good thing in my life let me sink under my own fear.
The one good thing turned out to be a big, fat lie.
And they all ask me why I want to die.

I don’t understand how you thought it would be okay,
To not mean anything you say.
What was going through your head?
I believed everything you said!

Well, congrats, you’ve broken me.
Yet, that no one will ever see.
I’ll just lock you up in my heart like the other one,
Because, baby, we’re done.
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We're Done

Contributed by XoBrokenxo on Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 02:12:37 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I said I loved you.
You said you loved me, too.
But not a word you told me was true.
It was all a lie.
And you said it all, looking me in the eye.

You know I’ve been through Hell,
You know how many times I’ve fell.
So tell me,
How could you hurt me this badly?
After you knew what I’d been through?
I trusted you.
And you let me down.
Now I really hope I can leave this damn town.
There’s nothing for me here.
Because the one good thing in my life let me sink under my own fear.
The one good thing turned out to be a big, fat lie.
And they all ask me why I want to die.

I don’t understand how you thought it would be okay,
To not mean anything you say.
What was going through your head?
I believed everything you said!

Well, congrats, you’ve broken me.
Yet, that no one will ever see.
I’ll just lock you up in my heart like the other one,
Because, baby, we’re done.

Copyright Â© XoBrokenxo ... [ 2008-09-21 02:12:37]
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Re: We're Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 05:59:22 AM AEST
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very sad...=( but hey, life goes on. we live, we learn. i guess sometimes we go thru the bad ones first in order to get to the right one...i hope u can still mend thru all ur hardships. keep writing, it'll help. nice poem again. take care
-K.Z.

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