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Array ( [sid] => 145095 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Slow Death. [time] => 2008-09-11 12:15:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I feel a sadness everyday
I guess it's the price that I pay
For allowing myself to exist this way
Loving you is like a slow death
As the poison of your name resonates off my breath
I can feel myself beginning to slowly decay
Suicide by love for I know no other way
And every day is just a brand new start
Another day for you to hurt me
Another way to break my heart
Still my devotion firmly stands
And I continue to hold on with broken hands
Loyal to every word I said
I know you don't care
But I'm going to love you until it kills me dead
Fidelity builds the structure of my existance
And despite the resistance my faith holds steady with persistence
I am a slave to the memories
Plagued by the wrath of loves disease
I'm walking on pins and needles when I'm not crawling on hands and knees
For just one minute, just one embrace
Praying to God to see your face
And the taste of disappointment is always fresh on my lips
You are the gun to my head but I'm the trigger that never slips
Because that which breaks me also holds me together
And eventhough it's a slow death...
I'm going to love you forever.
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Slow Death.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Thursday, 11th September 2008 @ 12:15:02 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I feel a sadness everyday
I guess it's the price that I pay
For allowing myself to exist this way
Loving you is like a slow death
As the poison of your name resonates off my breath
I can feel myself beginning to slowly decay
Suicide by love for I know no other way
And every day is just a brand new start
Another day for you to hurt me
Another way to break my heart
Still my devotion firmly stands
And I continue to hold on with broken hands
Loyal to every word I said
I know you don't care
But I'm going to love you until it kills me dead
Fidelity builds the structure of my existance
And despite the resistance my faith holds steady with persistence
I am a slave to the memories
Plagued by the wrath of loves disease
I'm walking on pins and needles when I'm not crawling on hands and knees
For just one minute, just one embrace
Praying to God to see your face
And the taste of disappointment is always fresh on my lips
You are the gun to my head but I'm the trigger that never slips
Because that which breaks me also holds me together
And eventhough it's a slow death...
I'm going to love you forever.




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Re: Slow Death. (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Thursday, 11th September 2008 @ 03:01:34 PM AEST
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wow! theres so much emotion and irony here...indeed, love contains both sadness and happiness. i guess the pain just shows how much u really love that person, (if i'm not mistaken), and this is that kind of relationship u hav. otherwise, i hope that person is worth the suffering, becuz if not, then it's just not worth it at all. good luk to u...again great write. take care
-K.Z.


Re: Slow Death. (User Rating: 1 )
by brownsugar8272 on Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 03:59:22 AM AEST
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so sad yet so true I know how you feel very powerful write. Keep it Up




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