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for I will ever be a petty, hopeless dreamer of romance,
an unworthy outcast of society, a lame excuse of a man.

I do not deserve you, neither do I deserve any chance,
but I continue being affectionate and compassionate
hoping God will set us up again in a love relationship.

This rejected, restless soul of mine still lives for you,
yet it possesses no courage to sincerely confront you
about my intolerant, imprisoned words that go unspoken,
about my intense emotions that are left unexpressed,
and about my heavy heart that bleeds to be opened.
It hurts not confessing the truth, but this is for the best.

Sooner or later, my enslaved love will be set free,
but it does not matter. You and I will never be…again.
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Better Left Unsaid

Contributed by Ambivalence on Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 01:40:30 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Even if I was your first, nice guys still finish last,
for I will ever be a petty, hopeless dreamer of romance,
an unworthy outcast of society, a lame excuse of a man.

I do not deserve you, neither do I deserve any chance,
but I continue being affectionate and compassionate
hoping God will set us up again in a love relationship.

This rejected, restless soul of mine still lives for you,
yet it possesses no courage to sincerely confront you
about my intolerant, imprisoned words that go unspoken,
about my intense emotions that are left unexpressed,
and about my heavy heart that bleeds to be opened.
It hurts not confessing the truth, but this is for the best.

Sooner or later, my enslaved love will be set free,
but it does not matter. You and I will never be…again.

Copyright Â© Ambivalence ... [ 2008-09-01 13:40:30]
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Re: Better Left Unsaid (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 08:08:36 PM AEST
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Oh yes, I can relate...
Emotion doesn't make you a weak person, it makes you strong. The feeble are the ones that walk away. Essentially cower away.
I sympathize and empathize because I am going through quite a bit of stuff myself.
There is no wrong or right in all of this, just what you are willing to endure.
I found this extremely moving because of my relationship and know exactly how you feel.
Well written, it exacts a true confusion of longing and the pain involved.
Steve

Re: Better Left Unsaid (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 05:38:17 PM AEST
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This is a good song but very sad!

Re: Better Left Unsaid (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 01:29:44 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feeling....now go tell her... nothing ventured, nothing gained, maybe she feels the same and is shy as well? truly well written beautiful poem,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Better Left Unsaid (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 09:19:08 AM AEST
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i feel your sadness,

well done,

wiz

Re: Better Left Unsaid (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 03:44:39 PM AEST
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Why is it that love hurts so badly when it's ripped from us?

I can SO relate to this line especially...

This rejected, restless soul of mine still lives for you,

I live that same life. You did a great job here, congratulations.

Be well,
Loende

Re: Better Left Unsaid (User Rating: 1 )
by cooley1818 on Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 12:20:48 PM AEST
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hey, was a very nice write, your pain bleeds through each line that u wrote..but dont sell your self short man, alot of guys deal with problems like this, it doesnt make u any less of a person, just keep ur head up, think of these things as just learning experiences. keep writing man, you have some very good stuff, thanks! ---cooley1818---

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