Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	03-June 09:30:20 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 144807 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Vampire [time] => 2008-08-30 12:27:03 [hometext] => I was captivated by vampires at one stage that's why i wrote this. [bodytext] => He waits for me
He waits at night
As he chants the words i like
Gate of darkness Circle of hell
Come with me i'll weave my spell
Come, he says, come to me
Be one of us, be one of me
You know you want it
I know i'm right so come
With me and
Feel my BITE!!!!! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 290 [topic] => 40 [informant] => leannabanana [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

The Vampire

Contributed by leannabanana on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 12:27:03 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

He waits for me
He waits at night
As he chants the words i like
Gate of darkness Circle of hell
Come with me i'll weave my spell
Come, he says, come to me
Be one of us, be one of me
You know you want it
I know i'm right so come
With me and
Feel my BITE!!!!!

Copyright © leannabanana ... [ 2008-08-30 12:27:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: The Vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 01:43:09 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I loved the flow in this.... really enjoyable read...
Welcome to YPDC... hope you enjoy it here..
Jenni

Re: The Vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 03:26:09 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

nice write,

wiz

Re: The Vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 04:13:56 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is great. I always love books and movies about vampires, so I was instantly drawn to this because of the title, and you did not disappoint. Can't wait to see some more of your poems! :D

--Katie

Re: The Vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 02:49:39 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Wow!

I am shocked at the simularities in the vampire's action to his victims kneck and the things this poem has done to my brain.

SCM

Re: The Vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by nature360 on Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 09:09:08 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Yes vampires are tempting.
So are lycans dragons, humans and shape-shifters.

The way you end it
'feel my bite'
sends a chill down the spine.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com