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Array ( [sid] => 144784 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Kill myself [time] => 2008-08-29 14:43:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Everyone is out to get me,
that's the way it seems.
Thoughts of suicide haunts my dreams,
and that's the way it will be.

I know life is hard for us all,
and it may get better one day.
I ask God and I pray,
“please don't let my fall.”

I always find it sad,
that I feel this way.
Why am I still alive today?
Is my life really this bad?

I lay in bed and I cry.
I have no job or no friends,
is this possibly the end?
Am I going to commit suicide?

You might be asking yourself and don't lie,
“why do I care what he has to say?”
well try to think about death all day,
and you might want to die.
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Kill myself

Contributed by moose2006 on Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 02:43:37 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Everyone is out to get me,
that's the way it seems.
Thoughts of suicide haunts my dreams,
and that's the way it will be.

I know life is hard for us all,
and it may get better one day.
I ask God and I pray,
“please don't let my fall.”

I always find it sad,
that I feel this way.
Why am I still alive today?
Is my life really this bad?

I lay in bed and I cry.
I have no job or no friends,
is this possibly the end?
Am I going to commit suicide?

You might be asking yourself and don't lie,
“why do I care what he has to say?”
well try to think about death all day,
and you might want to die.

Copyright Â© moose2006 ... [ 2008-08-29 14:43:37]
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Re: Kill myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 03:04:41 PM AEST
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deep deep emotion u spill here. but seriously i can relate to this perfectly, i wake up everyday not wanting to wake up, i'd rather not go through the day and face it, i just dont wanna live at all. even tho i feel this way, i hav to get up and fight today's challenges even tho i dont want to. by the end of the day, i feel stronger/better from my accomplishments. Bottom line, dont giv up, life has much too much to offer, u just gotta make the best of ur days even wen u face the worst. take care.
-K.Z.

Re: Kill myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Forgotten_soul on Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 03:12:00 AM AEST
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The last line left me speechless.
It means so much, and it's so true.

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