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Array ( [sid] => 144726 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A perfect day for me. [time] => 2008-08-26 00:25:53 [hometext] => Sorry there are a ton of errors but still i suppose its a good read. it will put a smile on her face i should hope. [bodytext] => A perfect day for me.

Waking up beside a woman i love at 3 in the morning reaching over and holding her tight kissing the back of her neck and closing my eyes just to fall back to sleep with her in my arms, then waking up again at 7 slowly getting out of bed kissing her softly and sneaking away to the kitchen to make stuffed hashbrowns toast and orange juice with extra pulp.

Bringing it into the room waking u with the aroma of delitiousness and we sit on the bed eating it. then she will trail off and into the shower where about 5 minutes later ill come in and get in with her kissing her wet skin, running my hands over her back around her hips appreciating every bit of her beautiful body. she will turn around with a look in her eye that i just cant deny and ill kiss her meaningfully and things will procede from there.

Finally we'll get out of the shower and ill let her dry her hair but her body air dry and me myself will rub some delicious lotion over her soft skin kissing her shoulders, her lips, her neck, her everywhere.

Once we are dressed we will go for a drive on a warm sunny day out to the beautiful city with tall buildings, malls, the saterday market and we will spend the whole day there shopping, eating, browsing, whatever she wished was hers would be. we would kiss in public, we would hold eachothers hands with the viewing people and not give a damn, we would look into eachothers eyes and be perfect and beautiful and we would make everyone jealous.

The day is done, now is the time for a drive home with the music up i would take her hand tight in mine and lift it to my lips to kiss it. glancing over just to look into her eyes. she leans over the center console to kiss me and ill lift my free hand up to the back of her head and it would be a long sensueous unsafe while driving kiss but we wouldnt care at that moment we again were the only ones in the world.

And when we arived home she would pick up her clothes and i would take most of then and then her hand and lead her to the house, we would maybe turn on the tv, we would maybe go to bed, we would maybe smoke a bowl, i dont make promises but when we fell asleep would be perfect until my day was finished at 12am.


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A perfect day for me.

Contributed by Shattered_soul on Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 12:25:53 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



A perfect day for me.

Waking up beside a woman i love at 3 in the morning reaching over and holding her tight kissing the back of her neck and closing my eyes just to fall back to sleep with her in my arms, then waking up again at 7 slowly getting out of bed kissing her softly and sneaking away to the kitchen to make stuffed hashbrowns toast and orange juice with extra pulp.

Bringing it into the room waking u with the aroma of delitiousness and we sit on the bed eating it. then she will trail off and into the shower where about 5 minutes later ill come in and get in with her kissing her wet skin, running my hands over her back around her hips appreciating every bit of her beautiful body. she will turn around with a look in her eye that i just cant deny and ill kiss her meaningfully and things will procede from there.

Finally we'll get out of the shower and ill let her dry her hair but her body air dry and me myself will rub some delicious lotion over her soft skin kissing her shoulders, her lips, her neck, her everywhere.

Once we are dressed we will go for a drive on a warm sunny day out to the beautiful city with tall buildings, malls, the saterday market and we will spend the whole day there shopping, eating, browsing, whatever she wished was hers would be. we would kiss in public, we would hold eachothers hands with the viewing people and not give a damn, we would look into eachothers eyes and be perfect and beautiful and we would make everyone jealous.

The day is done, now is the time for a drive home with the music up i would take her hand tight in mine and lift it to my lips to kiss it. glancing over just to look into her eyes. she leans over the center console to kiss me and ill lift my free hand up to the back of her head and it would be a long sensueous unsafe while driving kiss but we wouldnt care at that moment we again were the only ones in the world.

And when we arived home she would pick up her clothes and i would take most of then and then her hand and lead her to the house, we would maybe turn on the tv, we would maybe go to bed, we would maybe smoke a bowl, i dont make promises but when we fell asleep would be perfect until my day was finished at 12am.






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Re: A perfect day for me. (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 01:28:53 AM AEST
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that is so cute. this shows a lot of heart dude, a lot of love. ur girl is lucky. :o)

-kara




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