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Array ( [sid] => 14462 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Look away [time] => 2003-03-18 03:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Look away
if you don't like what you see
Look away
I am only me
Look away
I was the best I could be
Look away
as I set myself free

I was only a man
with no life in my plan
holding a knife in my hand
waiting to leave this land
away from the damned
where GOD left me stand
alone in the sand
as though I was scammed

I was nieve
I used to believe
there was something for me
but theres nothing I see
no future to be
so now I will leave
cutting my sleeve
away from the grief

So look away
if you don't like what you see
Just look away
I am only me
So look away
never again to be
Just look away
its over I'm free
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 420 [topic] => 36 [informant] => SuicidalSon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Look away

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Look away
if you don't like what you see
Look away
I am only me
Look away
I was the best I could be
Look away
as I set myself free

I was only a man
with no life in my plan
holding a knife in my hand
waiting to leave this land
away from the damned
where GOD left me stand
alone in the sand
as though I was scammed

I was nieve
I used to believe
there was something for me
but theres nothing I see
no future to be
so now I will leave
cutting my sleeve
away from the grief

So look away
if you don't like what you see
Just look away
I am only me
So look away
never again to be
Just look away
its over I'm free

Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2003-03-18 03:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Look away (User Rating: 1 )
by lostforgood on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 01:10:35 AM AEST
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this is very touching, i have enjoyed :) if ya ever wanna chat send a message my way

Re: Look away (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 02:40:07 PM AEST
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Very good poem although rather sad. I liked the rhyming structure. i don't know if u right from personal experience or not, but hang in there i know what those feelings are like.

Bobo (Joel)

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