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Is there something now wrong with I

Night off, so I'm at home, and she goes out
Had a shower, its not the smell, now I have my doubts

Gets up, she goes to work, no good morning....no goodbye
And so is this why? home is as lonely, as the empty sky

She gets home, I'm off to work, my goodbyes met with silence
What goes on, I wonder why, I need a degree in emotional science

Did I do you wrong, what have I done, nothing said, just none
You wont talk, so nothing can be fixed, and I am just one

It will end, I guess real soon, and you'll have flown
No more here, just me again, down and alone

But life goes on, or so they say
To yet another long lonely day. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 503 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Mick_Puttock [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

So Life Goes On

Contributed by Mick_Puttock on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 08:28:28 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Ignored, deadly quiet, with no reply
Is there something now wrong with I

Night off, so I'm at home, and she goes out
Had a shower, its not the smell, now I have my doubts

Gets up, she goes to work, no good morning....no goodbye
And so is this why? home is as lonely, as the empty sky

She gets home, I'm off to work, my goodbyes met with silence
What goes on, I wonder why, I need a degree in emotional science

Did I do you wrong, what have I done, nothing said, just none
You wont talk, so nothing can be fixed, and I am just one

It will end, I guess real soon, and you'll have flown
No more here, just me again, down and alone

But life goes on, or so they say
To yet another long lonely day.

Copyright © Mick_Puttock ... [ 2008-08-14 20:28:28]
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Re: So Life Goes On (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 09:28:21 PM AEST
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Looks like you have to start studying for that degree again, my friend... Good to see you with the pen again...
((((((((hugs))))))))
Jen

Re: So Life Goes On (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 11:25:22 PM AEST
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silence is hard to deal with, sooner or later things boil. have a great day. good write. Lane

Re: So Life Goes On (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 02:01:38 AM AEST
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Welcome back Mick, nice to see you posting again.

Re: So Life Goes On (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 11:14:03 AM AEST
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wow this is very heartfelt for something you just wrote.. its very well done and intense and im sure alot of people can relate.. Lovely job.. glad to see you writing again

rock on,
vampyress jenni

Re: So Life Goes On (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 05:09:11 PM AEST
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Well, my dear, dear, Webmaster,
It might be silent there but your pen is making mucho noise.
I'm alone but not lonly. Because when I found this site I found a purpose much greater than mine.
Now you know how we feel when we don't hear from you.
You still got all of us and we may be cantanerous at times but I think we all luv you.
If I hadn't found this spot my life would be very lonely too.
You've given my heart a home.
You give me a reason to keep on keepin on.
I'm so gratefull to be here and all that you do for us all.
Big huggs, smiles, much luv,
emy

Re: So Life Goes On (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 12:32:50 AM AEST
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Aah.. weldone.. Dear Sir, I have studied this "degree in emotional science" for few years...when my parents lived with us before they left to heaven..
God bless love and happiness :-)venkat

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