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Array ( [sid] => 144555 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Our Satyr [time] => 2008-08-14 16:56:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Our Satyr

If ever a reincarnation,
I am…
At least a shadow
Shadowed by his satyr.
A resemblance
Not in looks
But in appearance
His face, his hair
His sorrow…
The spiraling clouds
Intertwining lives
And pain
And understanding.
Observing others
Knowing
A Scimitar absorbing
Obsessed
Bloodied by what if felt
Knowing all too well what is felt.
Deciphering the cryptic scenes
Pictures upon a crumbling limestone wall
Wondering…
Sometimes knowing
What will become of it all.
Sinking in the dungeon
Through the slimy cracks
Struggling for a rising
From insipid facts.
I am…
At least a shadow
Chained me to my side
Shadowed by our satyr
Our resemblances
As though it never dies.







[comments] => 2 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 13 [informant] => wheels [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Our Satyr

Contributed by wheels on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 04:56:15 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Our Satyr

If ever a reincarnation,
I am…
At least a shadow
Shadowed by his satyr.
A resemblance
Not in looks
But in appearance
His face, his hair
His sorrow…
The spiraling clouds
Intertwining lives
And pain
And understanding.
Observing others
Knowing
A Scimitar absorbing
Obsessed
Bloodied by what if felt
Knowing all too well what is felt.
Deciphering the cryptic scenes
Pictures upon a crumbling limestone wall
Wondering…
Sometimes knowing
What will become of it all.
Sinking in the dungeon
Through the slimy cracks
Struggling for a rising
From insipid facts.
I am…
At least a shadow
Chained me to my side
Shadowed by our satyr
Our resemblances
As though it never dies.











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Re: Our Satyr (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 05:22:22 PM AEST
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Highly imaginative and well written ...I am sure the Greek Gods like it too lol.

regards,
FRANCO


Re: Our Satyr (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 23rd August 2008 @ 11:44:54 AM AEST
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this is well written my friend but dang sad. I miss ya.
answer ur text messages...... or your phone ok worried bout ya

love ya
hugs
Michelle




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