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my mop top as fringing from the squall;
which tasted the blow of a wall like
the nose bathed in powder that
now curved from a hard day's night
of Forward Control kissing the club
and its mojo filter went flying;
free of bolted limbo.

My mullet spoke Bowie to the innards
of the Gremlin X which stressed
the compressed freedom in steel
that appealed to the squalls coming from the rear;
from pedestrians knocked up on fear
who couldn't be curbed
from the catalytic converter.

A right-view mirror was crushed
like the careless spikes on my head
in a dead Punk Plymouth that voyaged
the squalls of air to aging vinyl sides
that stained in the Orwellian rain;
The Ramones who were Too Tough to Die.

The Explorer implored my final evasion
within the gashed grungy hair;
teared in lumps that stuck to the floor
making me squall the sounds of labor. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 43 [informant] => skyhawk432 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Metal Bodies of Birth

Contributed by skyhawk432 on Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 12:21:17 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The left side-view mirror displayed
my mop top as fringing from the squall;
which tasted the blow of a wall like
the nose bathed in powder that
now curved from a hard day's night
of Forward Control kissing the club
and its mojo filter went flying;
free of bolted limbo.

My mullet spoke Bowie to the innards
of the Gremlin X which stressed
the compressed freedom in steel
that appealed to the squalls coming from the rear;
from pedestrians knocked up on fear
who couldn't be curbed
from the catalytic converter.

A right-view mirror was crushed
like the careless spikes on my head
in a dead Punk Plymouth that voyaged
the squalls of air to aging vinyl sides
that stained in the Orwellian rain;
The Ramones who were Too Tough to Die.

The Explorer implored my final evasion
within the gashed grungy hair;
teared in lumps that stuck to the floor
making me squall the sounds of labor.

Copyright © skyhawk432 ... [ 2008-08-07 12:21:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Metal Bodies of Birth (User Rating: 1 )
by Benny14 on Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 06:17:28 PM AEST
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excellent.

Re: Metal Bodies of Birth (User Rating: 1 )
by ReyAkARey on Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 03:15:55 PM AEST
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unique .. wonderful

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