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Array ( [sid] => 144383 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silent Hill [time] => 2008-08-05 04:05:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It's quiet now
and no one is around
a shooting star
streaks across the sky
and I make a wish
for you to be mine.
InnerVisions sensually ebb and flow
and as I am having
sweet thoughts of you
magically
I see your smiling face
in the candle light,
then I descend
deep
into fantasies....

I touch and kiss you
and then we
sweetly embrace
and I know that you are feeling it too
by the look
that is on your face,
your love is like a drug to me
only give it to me
in small doses please...
I am burning with desire
I got to have your love
you got me on fire.

I sit and look out the window
feel a chill
as gentle breeze flows,
I see your reflection
in the candle light
I am wishing upon stars at night....
it is quiet now
and there
there is no one around. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 14 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Silent Hill

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 5th August 2008 @ 04:05:24 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

It's quiet now
and no one is around
a shooting star
streaks across the sky
and I make a wish
for you to be mine.
InnerVisions sensually ebb and flow
and as I am having
sweet thoughts of you
magically
I see your smiling face
in the candle light,
then I descend
deep
into fantasies....

I touch and kiss you
and then we
sweetly embrace
and I know that you are feeling it too
by the look
that is on your face,
your love is like a drug to me
only give it to me
in small doses please...
I am burning with desire
I got to have your love
you got me on fire.

I sit and look out the window
feel a chill
as gentle breeze flows,
I see your reflection
in the candle light
I am wishing upon stars at night....
it is quiet now
and there
there is no one around.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2008-08-05 04:05:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Silent Hill (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 11:13:50 AM AEST
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o`hell this is a good write! I did enjoy the read..Lane

Re: Silent Hill (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 09:56:12 AM AEST
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beautifull write.
huggs,
emy

Re: Silent Hill (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 07:38:16 AM AEST
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"I am burning with desire
I got to have your love
you got me on fire."
that's my favorite part :) well, along with...
"I am wishing upon stars at night....
it is quiet now
and there
there is no one around."
i dunno it's hard to choose.. this is such a great poem, i love it! :D

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