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Timeless Feelings

These feelings that we feel this day
The story reads like a stage play
A single spark is all this took
With a little tug to set the hook

Some softly spoken words had branded
And in our laps is where it landed
For this was fresh from out the gate
A timeless piece that could not wait

Had I had time to trace its track
Now far too late for a look back
I need this more than I ever knew
Who would have thought it would be you

But time is not all that much kind
And not enough we often find
To settle at a point this late
Some years had gone to dissipate

And when I think from now to then
I know I’d do this all again
These feelings had been sown from seed
And then fashioned to fulfill the need

~~*~~
2008-06-16
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Timeless Feelings

Contributed by ZiggyB on Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 09:44:42 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



~~*~~

Timeless Feelings

These feelings that we feel this day
The story reads like a stage play
A single spark is all this took
With a little tug to set the hook

Some softly spoken words had branded
And in our laps is where it landed
For this was fresh from out the gate
A timeless piece that could not wait

Had I had time to trace its track
Now far too late for a look back
I need this more than I ever knew
Who would have thought it would be you

But time is not all that much kind
And not enough we often find
To settle at a point this late
Some years had gone to dissipate

And when I think from now to then
I know I’d do this all again
These feelings had been sown from seed
And then fashioned to fulfill the need

~~*~~
2008-06-16




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Re: Timeless Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:42:20 AM AEST
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Excellent write, Stephan.... Good to see you posting again...
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Timeless Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 09:57:33 AM AEST
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Beautyfull.
smiles,
emy


Re: Timeless Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 10:46:46 AM AEST
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Wonderful write Stephan. sweet memories
last a lifetime......Mike


Re: Timeless Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:31:47 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this write, even moreso the second and third time I read it. I think it can have many interpretations for many people which means it can be far reaching. Thank you!


Re: Timeless Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 09:21:43 AM AEST
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Really nice. a touching poem.

--kevin


Re: Timeless Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 11:55:45 PM AEST
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Stephen, this was so beautiful. Timeless indeed! I see so much reflection in
this and that reflection is like the breath and sigh of an angel-- soft and
oh so delicate. I love the way this rolled off the tongue and just escaped
the body with extreme ease. Timeless feelings, and a timeless piece.

Wonderful post!!

~ Breezy




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