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Array ( [sid] => 143969 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Might Have Finally Gone Crazy [time] => 2008-07-17 14:12:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => At first I didn't quite understand
No way, your making a mistake.
There's no way there's something wrong with me
This is stress, not some psychotic break
I don't care what it is you say to me
There's nothing wrong with me I'm sure
There isn't a problem for you to fix
There's nothing for those drugs to cure
I don't want to go on medication
Why won't you listen to me?
I thought I had a say in this
I'm perfectly normal, can't you see?
But now I'm starting to believe you
Maybe there's something that Im missing
Wait I didn't say that I agree
These are my words that your twisting
Fine ill take your stupid medicine
You seem to think I've lost my mind
But you two are suppose to be my parents
Your suppose to see past this mask I hide behind
Fine I'll do this favor that you ask of me
since you think its going to change me in better ways
But now its messing with my head
I can't remember things for days
Please Do me a favor yeah? And remind me who I am
my memory has become a tad bit hazy
Maybe now I really need those drugs
Cuz I think I might have finally gone crazy.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 242 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Jazzyfizzle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
I Might Have Finally Gone Crazy

Contributed by Jazzyfizzle on Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 02:12:05 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



At first I didn't quite understand
No way, your making a mistake.
There's no way there's something wrong with me
This is stress, not some psychotic break
I don't care what it is you say to me
There's nothing wrong with me I'm sure
There isn't a problem for you to fix
There's nothing for those drugs to cure
I don't want to go on medication
Why won't you listen to me?
I thought I had a say in this
I'm perfectly normal, can't you see?
But now I'm starting to believe you
Maybe there's something that Im missing
Wait I didn't say that I agree
These are my words that your twisting
Fine ill take your stupid medicine
You seem to think I've lost my mind
But you two are suppose to be my parents
Your suppose to see past this mask I hide behind
Fine I'll do this favor that you ask of me
since you think its going to change me in better ways
But now its messing with my head
I can't remember things for days
Please Do me a favor yeah? And remind me who I am
my memory has become a tad bit hazy
Maybe now I really need those drugs
Cuz I think I might have finally gone crazy.




Copyright © Jazzyfizzle ... [ 2008-07-17 14:12:05]
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Re: I Might Have Finally Gone Crazy (User Rating: 1 )
by J-A-X on Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 02:52:00 PM AEST
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nice..very depictive piece


Re: I Might Have Finally Gone Crazy (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 03:09:59 PM AEST
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Wow you captured such intense emotion in this write.
Nicely done.

No you are not crazy but those damn pills will make ya feel like it indeed!

Hugs to you

Michelle




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