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Array ( [sid] => 143846 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The best night [time] => 2008-07-12 03:12:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You had the best ***** night?
Have the best ***** life
I need to know that you aren’t doing okay
When I enter your name, I feel shame
You and your drugs, you are blood
You leak out of pores, you swap up the fun
Your marks, they kill me, your love is gone
And the only way I can make this better is by writing this song
I used to need you in our bedroom, I could feel your taste in my mouth
You weren’t the type to clown around, I could feel you going down
Something in my memory is telling me, “remember this.”
I used to hold you close to me, now all I remember is your kiss
I am leaving to go far away and it seems
That the only part of me is missing, is in between the seams
And you are back in your hometown, with your cell phone in hand
I just wish I could talk to you so you could understand
I don’t need you, not now, but I did in the past
Wrote about you for years, hoping the memories would last
Now all I can say is ***** the memories
Give me something hard that will get me inbetween the knees
You had the best ***** night, and now I am ashamed
Because all I can say over and over again is your name

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The best night

Contributed by juliestevens18 on Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 03:12:43 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



You had the best ***** night?
Have the best ***** life
I need to know that you aren’t doing okay
When I enter your name, I feel shame
You and your drugs, you are blood
You leak out of pores, you swap up the fun
Your marks, they kill me, your love is gone
And the only way I can make this better is by writing this song
I used to need you in our bedroom, I could feel your taste in my mouth
You weren’t the type to clown around, I could feel you going down
Something in my memory is telling me, “remember this.”
I used to hold you close to me, now all I remember is your kiss
I am leaving to go far away and it seems
That the only part of me is missing, is in between the seams
And you are back in your hometown, with your cell phone in hand
I just wish I could talk to you so you could understand
I don’t need you, not now, but I did in the past
Wrote about you for years, hoping the memories would last
Now all I can say is ***** the memories
Give me something hard that will get me inbetween the knees
You had the best ***** night, and now I am ashamed
Because all I can say over and over again is your name





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Re: The best night (User Rating: 1 )
by Marrs on Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 11:25:02 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this, found it familiar.
At least the feeling within it.




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