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Array ( [sid] => 143686 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Roses Lament~ [time] => 2008-07-04 08:59:46 [hometext] => cowrite Rich/Michelle [bodytext] => A gilded rose under moonbeam’s gaze

Sits and waits for true love’s embrace

With ever saddening eyes patience abounds so there she stays

With her petals of flaxen satin and lace



She sways with the winds embrace

Faint star shine dancing on her velvet face

The shadows hide her sadness and disgrace

As she dreams of her true loves missing embrace



That gilded rose lost in her dreams she sits in a daze

As true love’s whisper flows like a summer’s wind

While the sky changes from warming hues to chilling grays

So it is this dream that enables her to carry on as upon the same breath her love she does send



Her dreams she carries soft and sweet.

Sighing she thinks of her lovers scent

Within these realms she feels complete.

Holding her heart light to strings of sentiment



While words turn silent heart-strings keep her firmly on the ground

With only one thought flying free nothing forever more will matter

For within herself everything that once was lost has been found

As her tears fall at her feet and like glass they shatter [comments] => 5 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 43 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
~Roses Lament~

Contributed by shelby on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 08:59:46 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



A gilded rose under moonbeam’s gaze

Sits and waits for true love’s embrace

With ever saddening eyes patience abounds so there she stays

With her petals of flaxen satin and lace



She sways with the winds embrace

Faint star shine dancing on her velvet face

The shadows hide her sadness and disgrace

As she dreams of her true loves missing embrace



That gilded rose lost in her dreams she sits in a daze

As true love’s whisper flows like a summer’s wind

While the sky changes from warming hues to chilling grays

So it is this dream that enables her to carry on as upon the same breath her love she does send



Her dreams she carries soft and sweet.

Sighing she thinks of her lovers scent

Within these realms she feels complete.

Holding her heart light to strings of sentiment



While words turn silent heart-strings keep her firmly on the ground

With only one thought flying free nothing forever more will matter

For within herself everything that once was lost has been found

As her tears fall at her feet and like glass they shatter




Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-07-04 08:59:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: ~Roses Lament~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 09:28:49 AM AEST
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Lovely visuals my friend..... another wonderful write by you and Rich.. Keep the coming..
Jenni


Re: ~Roses Lament~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 10:52:38 AM AEST
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There you two go again.
Painting a masterpiece of words.

"She sways with the winds embrace

Faint star shine dancing on her velvet face

The shadows hide her sadness and disgrace

As she dreams of her true loves missing embrace


Just incredible words, incredible........Mike


Re: ~Roses Lament~ (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 12:40:17 PM AEST
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Beautifully done and I really love the imagery.

I am with Mike, the second stanza just screams to me.

Peace my friends,

~Shannon


Re: ~Roses Lament~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 08:12:27 PM AEST
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We are regaining our popularity...Yes I think that we have created yet another masterpiece.
I think the title fits perfectly.

It is beautiful...Thanks Michelle.

Rich


Re: ~Roses Lament~ (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 2nd September 2020 @ 10:00:32 PM AEST
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Simply beautiful my friend.




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