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Array ( [sid] => 143680 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shining Together [time] => 2008-07-04 05:37:38 [hometext] => For Rick we can get through this I Love You sooooo much please dont hurt me, i cant bear to lose you again it hurts so much when we fight [bodytext] => He is there when I need him, even when i dont
He may be angry or frustrated but he always calls
At one point or another, Always to talk, even in silence
He comforts me, he is my anchor when i am on the verge of
Floating away, When I feel lost and confused, I think of him
And only him

I cant stop loving him no matter what happens
Between us good or bad, loving or hurtful
I can stop thinking of him fighting hurts me, tears me apart
My mind cant help it, it plays moments over and over again
Reopening the wounds that were inflicted upon me

My head is very confused, spinning in circles never walking
A straight line, curving and rolling, wave upon wave hit me
And send my body and heart spireling downwards, never ending never
Ceasing the anguish that settles within me

We will get through it we will win, if we remember the good times
The bad times will pass and we will push through and conquer all

Although it seems hard and like you'll never get over it
It feels like the world is crumbling and all you want is, to
Fall into a black hole where everything is silent and you cant see or
Hear anything, no way to listen

So you have to believe

You will get through this, that you will see the light above leading you out
And warms you from the inside out, awaking yourself hoping that

Everything is going to be alright, just keep
Believing and you'll pull through
And once more shine together [comments] => 2 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 44 [informant] => GreenEves16 [notes] => (Edited by Mod_11 for spelling) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )

Shining Together

Contributed by GreenEves16 on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 05:37:38 AM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

He is there when I need him, even when i dont
He may be angry or frustrated but he always calls
At one point or another, Always to talk, even in silence
He comforts me, he is my anchor when i am on the verge of
Floating away, When I feel lost and confused, I think of him
And only him

I cant stop loving him no matter what happens
Between us good or bad, loving or hurtful
I can stop thinking of him fighting hurts me, tears me apart
My mind cant help it, it plays moments over and over again
Reopening the wounds that were inflicted upon me

My head is very confused, spinning in circles never walking
A straight line, curving and rolling, wave upon wave hit me
And send my body and heart spireling downwards, never ending never
Ceasing the anguish that settles within me

We will get through it we will win, if we remember the good times
The bad times will pass and we will push through and conquer all

Although it seems hard and like you'll never get over it
It feels like the world is crumbling and all you want is, to
Fall into a black hole where everything is silent and you cant see or
Hear anything, no way to listen

So you have to believe

You will get through this, that you will see the light above leading you out
And warms you from the inside out, awaking yourself hoping that

Everything is going to be alright, just keep
Believing and you'll pull through
And once more shine together

Copyright © GreenEves16 ... [ 2008-07-04 05:37:38]
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Re: Shining Together (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 08:33:20 AM AEST
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A beautiful peice of writting, the voice of love
in all it's desperate nakedness, longing for
even a tad of hope, in a moment thas has
sadly come and gone, your poem is that of
a painting deserving of more than just a
passing view, like a sunrise it wait's patiently,
for another chance at dawn . . .

thank you also for reading my poem and your
comment, it was most appreciated indeed . . .

Ben

Re: Shining Together (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 10:33:12 AM AEST
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This write is full of heart and soul. I
hope everything works out for you.
Mike

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