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Array ( [sid] => 142933 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Puddle Jumping~ [time] => 2008-06-04 01:21:32 [hometext] => who wants to come? [bodytext] => The down pour, round raindrops bouncing.
Wind howling skies black as coal.
Awake all night, with windows open listening to the drops,
little patters filling my ears, smell of freshness inviting.

Would you like to come with me outside?
Dance in the rain, run across the grass bare footed,
find the biggest puddle we can find and jump,
splashing water, dripping wet, soaked to the skin, sounds fun ?

We could hold hands and jump together.
Rain falling in currents right now,
mini rivers racing down the sides of the streets
plenty a puddle to jump in for two.

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~Puddle Jumping~

Contributed by shelby on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 01:21:32 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

The down pour, round raindrops bouncing.
Wind howling skies black as coal.
Awake all night, with windows open listening to the drops,
little patters filling my ears, smell of freshness inviting.

Would you like to come with me outside?
Dance in the rain, run across the grass bare footed,
find the biggest puddle we can find and jump,
splashing water, dripping wet, soaked to the skin, sounds fun ?

We could hold hands and jump together.
Rain falling in currents right now,
mini rivers racing down the sides of the streets
plenty a puddle to jump in for two.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-06-04 01:21:32]
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Re: ~Puddle Jumping~ (User Rating: 1 )
by SammieMarie on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 03:23:02 AM AEST
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I really like this poem, because i always try to write poems about the rain, because i love it so much.
Needless to say my poems never work out.
But great job, really.

Re: ~Puddle Jumping~ (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 06:43:23 AM AEST
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Taking my shoes off right now....I am there.

Great write Shelby.

Deadwriter

Re: ~Puddle Jumping~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 08:43:36 AM AEST
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A really fun write, Michelle... and since three is company..I'll just look on at you and Deadwriter from the side....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: ~Puddle Jumping~ (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 07:39:26 PM AEST
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Beautiful language with wonderful story, very nice, I love it..

Re: ~Puddle Jumping~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 09:56:01 PM AEST
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Oh pick me! Pick me!!!!

I LOVE jumping in puddles and just general shenanigans in the rain!
And now there is no one to get angry at me for getting wet! :P

This was fun sweets! I love it!

(Miss you too chicklet )

Hope your week is fairing well ^_^

HUGS

~Breezy

Re: ~Puddle Jumping~ (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_again on Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 06:28:00 AM AEST
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You always make me smile girl. I am coming!

LA

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