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Array ( [sid] => 142892 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All alone [time] => 2008-06-02 12:45:33 [hometext] => This is my first attempt at poetry... I don't really now anything about it. Be kind. [bodytext] => All alone, dark
Lost in a dream which I cannot be found.
I’ve felt this way, not until now
But deep, I’ve always known.
I tried to hide it, but my face shows the emotion
Why do I know what I want
But I cant reach this beyond
I’ve faced all my demons inside my head
And I’ve realized that everything
Wont get better
I could have the world
And I’d throw it away
All alone, dark
I’ve felt this way, forever [comments] => 3 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MrSelfDistruct [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

All alone

Contributed by MrSelfDistruct on Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 12:45:33 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

All alone, dark
Lost in a dream which I cannot be found.
I’ve felt this way, not until now
But deep, I’ve always known.
I tried to hide it, but my face shows the emotion
Why do I know what I want
But I cant reach this beyond
I’ve faced all my demons inside my head
And I’ve realized that everything
Wont get better
I could have the world
And I’d throw it away
All alone, dark
I’ve felt this way, forever

Copyright Â© MrSelfDistruct ... [ 2008-06-02 12:45:33]
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Re: All alone (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 12:49:42 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.

Well for not knowing as you stated.... I find you did a darn good job with this.

A wonderful start, I will watch for more. Lost in a dream which I cannot be found........ that is so sad.

You are found right here right now. Keep writing.

Michelle

Re: All alone (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 03:40:38 PM AEST
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Seems like you know what you're doing to me.
Never would have guessed that this was your first poem.
Hope to see more great writes from you.

-Callif

Re: All alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy on Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 01:03:56 AM AEST
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Welcome to the site! This is a great poem,i think you've caputred your feelings beautifully!
Well done i looking forward to reading more from you!

Puppy :)

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