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That horrible and absolutely amazing dream.
I was doing so good—
I was getting over you.
…Until that dream.
I saw the guy I wanted you to be,
The way every girl would appreciate.
You texted me,
Said you loved me.
You invited me to your house;
I said I’d ask.
I felt my heart expand,
And start to beat again.
It was the best thing in the world, that feeling.
And then I woke up.
I was thrown back into reality,
Where you aren’t like that,
Where I am slowly killing myself,
Where I wait on you to change your mind.
That stupid dream.
Now I have to start all over again.
I have to reprogram my head,
Realize that you are not that guy in my dream.
No, you’re much worse.
Yet I still love you.
That stupid dream.
That terrible and perfect dream.
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That Dream

Contributed by xoBrokenxo on Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 11:27:12 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

That dream.
That horrible and absolutely amazing dream.
I was doing so good—
I was getting over you.
…Until that dream.
I saw the guy I wanted you to be,
The way every girl would appreciate.
You texted me,
Said you loved me.
You invited me to your house;
I said I’d ask.
I felt my heart expand,
And start to beat again.
It was the best thing in the world, that feeling.
And then I woke up.
I was thrown back into reality,
Where you aren’t like that,
Where I am slowly killing myself,
Where I wait on you to change your mind.
That stupid dream.
Now I have to start all over again.
I have to reprogram my head,
Realize that you are not that guy in my dream.
No, you’re much worse.
Yet I still love you.
That stupid dream.
That terrible and perfect dream.

Copyright Â© xoBrokenxo ... [ 2008-05-30 11:27:12]
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Re: That Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 11:41:11 AM AEST
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The dreams seem to be hurting so many lately. I hope you find the will power to either not have the dream or to replace him in the dream with someone else. Wishing you the best.

Deadwriter

Re: That Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by jessb3 on Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 11:41:17 AM AEST
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I can definitely relate to this poem. I know how it feels to you think you're moving forward and then something will happen to make you go backwards. Great work!!!

Re: That Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 01:22:03 PM AEST
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What a unique work of art.
Awesome!
huggs, smiles, dreams,
emy

Re: That Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 04:44:22 AM AEST
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I liked the style of this write. Nicely done. I also wish for you sweet dreams that take you floating on angel wings for a beautiful show of the stardust and galaxies.

Michelle

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