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Array ( [sid] => 142637 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => with out you [time] => 2008-05-24 15:30:43 [hometext] => this is about the man who give me the gift of being able to trust and love agian [bodytext] => I can't live without you. I would breathe the air, and my heart would beat,
but I would not feel the joy of life.
My dreams would be lost like a leaf carted away by a storm.
I would gaze at the stars without appreciating the
way they light up the sky.
I would pass the roses in bloom without noticing their beauty.
I would no longer look forward to each sunset and each dawn.
I would be broken, never to be mended again.
Winter would own my heart;
its icy breath would steal the warmth in my soul, because I could not smile without your love.
I could not know laughter or happiness.If you were lost to me,
I'd have no reason to try, no reason to be.
You are my prayer, my shelter from hopelessness and despair,
my sunshine, my light, my lazy days,
and my peaceful nights,
you only you can keep the spark in my soul burning bright
thanks to you i can look at my son and smile
thanks to you i can love the world around me
thanks to you i can wake every moring with smile on my face
and sleep every night with no hurt in my heart
with out you i would be nothing
i love you and my amazing little boy this is for you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 48 [informant] => meddowrose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
with out you

Contributed by meddowrose on Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 03:30:43 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I can't live without you. I would breathe the air, and my heart would beat,
but I would not feel the joy of life.
My dreams would be lost like a leaf carted away by a storm.
I would gaze at the stars without appreciating the
way they light up the sky.
I would pass the roses in bloom without noticing their beauty.
I would no longer look forward to each sunset and each dawn.
I would be broken, never to be mended again.
Winter would own my heart;
its icy breath would steal the warmth in my soul, because I could not smile without your love.
I could not know laughter or happiness.If you were lost to me,
I'd have no reason to try, no reason to be.
You are my prayer, my shelter from hopelessness and despair,
my sunshine, my light, my lazy days,
and my peaceful nights,
you only you can keep the spark in my soul burning bright
thanks to you i can look at my son and smile
thanks to you i can love the world around me
thanks to you i can wake every moring with smile on my face
and sleep every night with no hurt in my heart
with out you i would be nothing
i love you and my amazing little boy this is for you




Copyright © meddowrose ... [ 2008-05-24 15:30:43]
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Re: with out you (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 03:54:05 PM AEST
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First of all I want to say I love your screen name.
Secondly this poem is full of all that is good and you are so blessed to know this love. I know it as well and what would it be without it? Incredible write.

Michelle


Re: with out you (User Rating: 1 )
by Roddy on Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 04:18:30 PM AEST
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Can we say Hallmark? lol

Seriously you should sell that to Hallmark that was deeply emtional, and sweet


Re: with out you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 04:31:08 AM AEST
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i thought it started out very weak, but damn you put some oomph into this. i cant even spell it, but you know what i am talking about. this poem, emotional power. you got me straight charged.




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