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Array ( [sid] => 142443 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tons of wounds alive [time] => 2008-05-17 12:01:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Today was sad, I've had
Tons of wounds, platoon
Destroy lifes, you've had
Make others look bad
Yesterday wasn't there 4 me
Other worlds we see
Planets, planez, one globe
No hope, (tripple insane)
Using the term very often
You find your lovin'
In a way or another
Stay alert, monthz later sorry
Tomorrow, I may search 4 peace
Good look, but it seems
2 be against all believes
First millions has 2 be deceased
One party is testin'
The other friendly and askin'
How can this stop
When the first has it's nutt
Time will pass away
Thru the river, ticz the clock
Which they are usin' in 4-play
Those second nutz
I let it be what it be when THEY see,

The lights

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Tons of wounds alive

Contributed by ratty on Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 12:01:31 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Today was sad, I've had
Tons of wounds, platoon
Destroy lifes, you've had
Make others look bad
Yesterday wasn't there 4 me
Other worlds we see
Planets, planez, one globe
No hope, (tripple insane)
Using the term very often
You find your lovin'
In a way or another
Stay alert, monthz later sorry
Tomorrow, I may search 4 peace
Good look, but it seems
2 be against all believes
First millions has 2 be deceased
One party is testin'
The other friendly and askin'
How can this stop
When the first has it's nutt
Time will pass away
Thru the river, ticz the clock
Which they are usin' in 4-play
Those second nutz
I let it be what it be when THEY see,

The lights

Copyright © ratty ... [ 2008-05-17 12:01:31]
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Re: Tons of wounds alive (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 12:50:31 AM AEST
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