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Array ( [sid] => 142331 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Feeling...This Need. [time] => 2008-05-12 20:41:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This feeling in my heart
It's so much more than a want
It's an endless need
It glazes over inside my eyes
And streams through the blood I bleed
An eternal fire that burns
And my body yearns
Like you just wouldn't believe
I crave you like a drug
So bad your name resonates off my lips
Each and every single time I breathe
And I truly believe
The level of this feeling
Is something too deep to percieve
Like an endless ocean
I carry the waves of devotion
Drowning inside my own skin
This feeling, this need
It breeds from within
Tracing it's desire through me
I can taste it on my lips
And feel it in my energy
Consuming me whole
This love I have for you
Builds the structure of my soul
I close my eyes and you're there
Inside every reflection and shadow
I can even feel you in the air
Because I love you so much
That nothing else can even compare
So I'll fight to the death
Until my very last breath
To make you understand what you mean to me
This feeling, this love...
I just need you to see. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 242 [topic] => 22 [informant] => bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
This Feeling...This Need.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 08:41:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



This feeling in my heart
It's so much more than a want
It's an endless need
It glazes over inside my eyes
And streams through the blood I bleed
An eternal fire that burns
And my body yearns
Like you just wouldn't believe
I crave you like a drug
So bad your name resonates off my lips
Each and every single time I breathe
And I truly believe
The level of this feeling
Is something too deep to percieve
Like an endless ocean
I carry the waves of devotion
Drowning inside my own skin
This feeling, this need
It breeds from within
Tracing it's desire through me
I can taste it on my lips
And feel it in my energy
Consuming me whole
This love I have for you
Builds the structure of my soul
I close my eyes and you're there
Inside every reflection and shadow
I can even feel you in the air
Because I love you so much
That nothing else can even compare
So I'll fight to the death
Until my very last breath
To make you understand what you mean to me
This feeling, this love...
I just need you to see.




Copyright © bleedthelove ... [ 2008-05-12 20:41:02]
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Re: This Feeling...This Need. (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 05:14:39 AM AEST
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This is a beautifully written poem, there is doubt about the amout of love you have for them!

Puppy :)


Re: This Feeling...This Need. (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 11:23:29 AM AEST
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Great piece. Exactly straight to the point with words that flowed smothly to the end.

Deadwriter


Re: This Feeling...This Need. (User Rating: 1 )
by Chamaron on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 12:44:03 PM AEST
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The last line says it all. Nice job.


Re: This Feeling...This Need. (User Rating: 1 )
by jessb3 on Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 04:38:01 PM AEST
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Fantastic poem! I love it!!!




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