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Array ( [sid] => 142099 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Fate of Growing Up [time] => 2008-05-03 08:28:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => yes
the fate
the same fate that leads to go into the real world
we have to do it and go through it
no matter if we are ready or not
the day will come
when parents have to say bye to
their children
and watch them speard their wings
and move on into the real world
to see if others see what they see in you
because your parents want what is best for us
no matter what way they show it
or how they were told to raise their own
it is just the way of life
and how god sees you fit into this world
we call home
the world changes everyday
so parents have to get the basics
in order for you to be prepared
that way when you get a chance
to thank them
for everything
and so you can hear
" we believed in you...from the moment you were born"
there is no sweeter moment than that
i hope to see that day
how about you?
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 21 [informant] => PreciousKitten [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

The Fate of Growing Up

Contributed by PreciousKitten on Saturday, 3rd May 2008 @ 08:28:46 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

yes
the fate
the same fate that leads to go into the real world
we have to do it and go through it
no matter if we are ready or not
the day will come
when parents have to say bye to
their children
and watch them speard their wings
and move on into the real world
to see if others see what they see in you
because your parents want what is best for us
no matter what way they show it
or how they were told to raise their own
it is just the way of life
and how god sees you fit into this world
we call home
the world changes everyday
so parents have to get the basics
in order for you to be prepared
that way when you get a chance
to thank them
for everything
and so you can hear
" we believed in you...from the moment you were born"
there is no sweeter moment than that
i hope to see that day
how about you?

Copyright © PreciousKitten ... [ 2008-05-03 08:28:46]
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Re: The Fate of Growing Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Poser on Saturday, 3rd May 2008 @ 09:01:19 AM AEST
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I hope to see that day indeed, but most times I doubt it will come. Failure from birth to this day.

Don't give up.

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