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Array ( [sid] => 141875 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I knew you [time] => 2008-04-26 08:05:46 [hometext] => this is about a totally new topic... not my best but i wanted to contribute to the site [bodytext] => I loved you deep in my heart
but we both know that it was a shadow
you only came out in the morning
and i let you get the best of me while i was asleep

touch and go you held me for so long
so long, i thought you were apart of me
but now i look at you with your toys
and wonder... where did you go?

because you aren't the girl i thought you were
your laughter is false, your breath, so fake
your smile isn't the same, and even worse
you told me that it was fate

i forget about what we had because
we really didn't have a thing
maybe a box of memories
or notes
but nothing to give our love wings

amazing to me how two people can be such different things
i watch as you sit down and yell
hoping someone will catch you and say
everything will be ok

i thought i knew you until you said go
and it has been a year
but i won't let your lies show
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I knew you

Contributed by juliestevens18 on Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 08:05:46 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I loved you deep in my heart
but we both know that it was a shadow
you only came out in the morning
and i let you get the best of me while i was asleep

touch and go you held me for so long
so long, i thought you were apart of me
but now i look at you with your toys
and wonder... where did you go?

because you aren't the girl i thought you were
your laughter is false, your breath, so fake
your smile isn't the same, and even worse
you told me that it was fate

i forget about what we had because
we really didn't have a thing
maybe a box of memories
or notes
but nothing to give our love wings

amazing to me how two people can be such different things
i watch as you sit down and yell
hoping someone will catch you and say
everything will be ok

i thought i knew you until you said go
and it has been a year
but i won't let your lies show

Copyright © juliestevens18 ... [ 2008-04-26 08:05:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I knew you (User Rating: 1 )
by ferasdour on Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 09:35:09 AM AEST
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i found this one to be rather good.

keep it up.

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