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Array ( [sid] => 141609 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wandering rose [time] => 2008-04-15 14:34:28 [hometext] => one day it will be made into a song....... just thoughts on the page for now dusting just a dusting...... [bodytext] => Rain is falling on the blossoms
There are no stars out tonight.
They are hiding behind a blanket of clouds
Another wet dark rainy night.

Memories come round the corner
on the tail of a gusty coastal wind
searching for the answers dying
beside the night a restful friend.

Then there is the roads long and unending.
Black ribbons lacing states and places
wanderlust takes over gets beneath your skin
roam on little gypsy rose, day is long night is coming again.

We pave our way in this old life.
Stand a little taller when we could have fallen
Gathering thought and memory along each path
Keep on going, no looking back.

One last dance, one last kiss.
Thoughts scratched in sands
of times we have missed.
Calico winds and daydreams fading.

Then there is the roads long and unending.
Black ribbons lacing states and places.
Wanderlust takes over, gets beneath your skin
roam on little gypsy rose, day is long night is coming
again.

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Wandering rose

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 02:34:28 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Rain is falling on the blossoms
There are no stars out tonight.
They are hiding behind a blanket of clouds
Another wet dark rainy night.

Memories come round the corner
on the tail of a gusty coastal wind
searching for the answers dying
beside the night a restful friend.

Then there is the roads long and unending.
Black ribbons lacing states and places
wanderlust takes over gets beneath your skin
roam on little gypsy rose, day is long night is coming again.

We pave our way in this old life.
Stand a little taller when we could have fallen
Gathering thought and memory along each path
Keep on going, no looking back.

One last dance, one last kiss.
Thoughts scratched in sands
of times we have missed.
Calico winds and daydreams fading.

Then there is the roads long and unending.
Black ribbons lacing states and places.
Wanderlust takes over, gets beneath your skin
roam on little gypsy rose, day is long night is coming
again.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-04-15 14:34:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wandering rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 04:30:01 PM AEST
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Calico winds and daydreams fading. Shel,

absolutely beautiful, i love the line above,

and it just swept me away, what a vision,

i could feel every discription physicaly . . .

your a true a village poet . . .

((((Michelle))))

Ben

Re: Wandering rose (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 09:55:34 PM AEST
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Very nice piece. Would be a great song.

Deadwriter

Re: Wandering rose (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 12:20:04 PM AEST
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Awesome. It will be a hit. I want first autographeg copy.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Wandering rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 06:01:19 AM AEST
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You've painted a very vivid, wonderful picture!

Re: Wandering rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 08:07:53 AM AEST
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Hey Shels...I love the initial setting... rainy nights are just wonderful...(just as long as I am home with my family) then come the memories... mmmm. Overall, a beautiful write.. Best of luck with the song....
Hugs, Jenn

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