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Array ( [sid] => 141172 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Breathless Kiss [time] => 2008-03-25 17:35:36 [hometext] => Older still. I think its amazing I even shook my way through writing this poem the first time. [bodytext] =>
Oh so breathless this pain is totally endless
Oh baby look at me, tell me how do you see me
How do you bare to look at me
Body painted with bruises and scars
A ***** with no heart
Keep on looking at the ***** you found
Look in my eyes, quit staring at the ground
Is it really all that bad now
Just let me kiss you endlessly
Oh just let me leave you breathelessly
Cmon sweet thing of mine, lets end this loving tonight
Oh yeah well these scars, they are all your fault
So take a good look and see, just how pathetic you could make me be
See the weakness in me
Dont play this off
You know I know you better than anyone else
I know those lies just as well
You think you are pulling me me under again
And maybe you are baby
But you dont bear these scars, take my hand watch it closely
As I take yours in mine, mm baby lets play this game
Just one more time
I will show you mine, if I can give you yours
By that I mean, these razorblade scars of course
Why do you look at me that way darling
Oh please the sting wont last long, If I can handle it
Then why cant you
Maybe its because I have nothing to lose
But then at this point, neither do you
Look at those tears, what is it now
Its like you havent seen me in years
No I dont want this, I cant take it
How about we get rid of it
Oh dear what a mess we have here
You didnt expect that did you
Neither did I but that didnt mean I didnt try
Ah see you messed me up
Lost me in a word, oh yeah well you called it love
But all I heard you scream was slut
This isnt all, dont you dare turn away again
You are going to see the damage you did
Here is one from the first time it happened, right here across my arm
And heres the last one just personally carved, right across your neck
Oh baby, how do you see me now
This gets to be our last kiss, mm our love ends in death
See I knew Id leave you breathless [comments] => 2 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Marrs [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
Breathless Kiss

Contributed by Marrs on Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 05:35:36 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



Oh so breathless this pain is totally endless
Oh baby look at me, tell me how do you see me
How do you bare to look at me
Body painted with bruises and scars
A ***** with no heart
Keep on looking at the ***** you found
Look in my eyes, quit staring at the ground
Is it really all that bad now
Just let me kiss you endlessly
Oh just let me leave you breathelessly
Cmon sweet thing of mine, lets end this loving tonight
Oh yeah well these scars, they are all your fault
So take a good look and see, just how pathetic you could make me be
See the weakness in me
Dont play this off
You know I know you better than anyone else
I know those lies just as well
You think you are pulling me me under again
And maybe you are baby
But you dont bear these scars, take my hand watch it closely
As I take yours in mine, mm baby lets play this game
Just one more time
I will show you mine, if I can give you yours
By that I mean, these razorblade scars of course
Why do you look at me that way darling
Oh please the sting wont last long, If I can handle it
Then why cant you
Maybe its because I have nothing to lose
But then at this point, neither do you
Look at those tears, what is it now
Its like you havent seen me in years
No I dont want this, I cant take it
How about we get rid of it
Oh dear what a mess we have here
You didnt expect that did you
Neither did I but that didnt mean I didnt try
Ah see you messed me up
Lost me in a word, oh yeah well you called it love
But all I heard you scream was slut
This isnt all, dont you dare turn away again
You are going to see the damage you did
Here is one from the first time it happened, right here across my arm
And heres the last one just personally carved, right across your neck
Oh baby, how do you see me now
This gets to be our last kiss, mm our love ends in death
See I knew Id leave you breathless




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Re: Breathless Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 07:00:51 PM AEST
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i never thought i'd be able to enjoy a cutting poem, but you did a great job with flow and style. i felt like i was right there in the moment.


Re: Breathless Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by BRIDGI on Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 12:48:04 AM AEST
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Wow...i love this poem..the way you went about it...like the emotion..i really enjoyed reading it...

BRidgette




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