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To thee my lass, dwell afar across mighty seas,
I set to bake a cake of love; intended to remit it
through the drifting puffy clouds; ingredients
chosen form my pounding heart.

Bowl filled with flour of passion, few cups
of pure sugar of compassion, to blend well
append a few fresh eggs of inner yearning;
dripped a drop of fragrance of lust.

Popped in the blend into the oven of trust,
turned on the warmth of faith, and set
timer of harmony to the leave that must,
held on my breath, for time to ripe.

Lo! To thee I baked a cake of love topping it with
cream of sharing and nuts and fruits of support.
-FRANCO-
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To Bake a Cake of Love.

Contributed by FRANCO on Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

To thee my lass, dwell afar across mighty seas,
I set to bake a cake of love; intended to remit it
through the drifting puffy clouds; ingredients
chosen form my pounding heart.

Bowl filled with flour of passion, few cups
of pure sugar of compassion, to blend well
append a few fresh eggs of inner yearning;
dripped a drop of fragrance of lust.

Popped in the blend into the oven of trust,
turned on the warmth of faith, and set
timer of harmony to the leave that must,
held on my breath, for time to ripe.

Lo! To thee I baked a cake of love topping it with
cream of sharing and nuts and fruits of support.
-FRANCO-

Copyright © FRANCO ... [ 2008-03-25 00:45:00]
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Re: To Bake a Cake of Love. (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_blue on Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 01:43:04 AM AEST
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lovely use of words...i love the metaphors, very expressive and clever

Re: To Bake a Cake of Love. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 11:02:29 AM AEST
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Franco this is a pure joy to read.

Michelle

Re: To Bake a Cake of Love. (User Rating: 1 )
by GingerB on Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 02:48:02 PM AEST
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Delicious, Franco!! Enjoyed the read...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: To Bake a Cake of Love. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 03:24:43 PM AEST
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Beautifull, creative write.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: To Bake a Cake of Love. (User Rating: 1 )
by BRIDGI on Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 01:01:09 AM AEST
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wow..seems like a good cake....i like it...

BRidgette

Re: To Bake a Cake of Love. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 01:14:55 AM AEST
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Franco, I love the metaphor you've used. It seems you have all the
necessary ingredients to build a delicate and most delicious
sweetness. And the frosting? Two hearts that beat and swoon in
time with the other. Damn. This is so romantic, my friend. You
have such a unique way with words.

There is a magic and a comfort in this piece that makes the reader
want to fall asleep in its very essence. Beautiful, writing, Franco.

^_^

~Breezy

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