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Array ( [sid] => 140491 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As I Drift [time] => 2008-02-20 00:53:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I want to say good night as I
Drift

Into my world of sleep

I counted each cloud it seem
In my drowsy state

Barely keeping my eyes open

As I grow impatient wanting

To

Inhale you

The scent of you engulfs me

All around me as I drift into
My own little dream state

My world of you

I see you’re face etched on the

Clouds

Your potrait so vivid

Wanting

As your hemline catches my eye

Our love is fresh exciting just as

If

We were back in our youth

With a renewal of our lives

Dedicating our love so fragile

In our own fairytale land

Our dreams

I feel your body as you lie beside
Me

I feel your body touch

The warmth

The love fills me full

What a beautiful revelation

So quaint

Left us

Wanting, waiting ,yearning

To start our love anew

Into our fairytale land our

Dreams is the revelation..

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As I Drift

Contributed by honey56 on Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 12:53:18 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I want to say good night as I
Drift

Into my world of sleep

I counted each cloud it seem
In my drowsy state

Barely keeping my eyes open

As I grow impatient wanting

To

Inhale you

The scent of you engulfs me

All around me as I drift into
My own little dream state

My world of you

I see you’re face etched on the

Clouds

Your potrait so vivid

Wanting

As your hemline catches my eye

Our love is fresh exciting just as

If

We were back in our youth

With a renewal of our lives

Dedicating our love so fragile

In our own fairytale land

Our dreams

I feel your body as you lie beside
Me

I feel your body touch

The warmth

The love fills me full

What a beautiful revelation

So quaint

Left us

Wanting, waiting ,yearning

To start our love anew

Into our fairytale land our

Dreams is the revelation..

Copyright Â© honey56 ... [ 2008-02-20 00:53:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: As I Drift (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 10:39:48 PM AEST
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oh honey, this was so damn beautiful!!
I love the line,

"As I grow impatient wanting
To
Inhale you"

Damn! Now that is poetry! Excellent
wording and flow. So dreamy ..

Beauty in words ~

~Breezy

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