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You are,

you are a dangerous addiction

You are,

you are a needle in my vein

You are,

you are a virulent affliction

And I,

can't tell the pleasure from the pain

She blends herself into my blood and I can feel the burn
My body tingles from the rush, you'd think that I would learn
I know I cannot pay the price that comes with this desire
So I will sell my soul and dive headfirst into the fire...

You are,

you are a line upon a mirror

You are,

you are a habit sent from Hell

You are,

You are the Devil drawing nearer

And I,

will die a captive to your spell

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Addiction

Contributed by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 05:01:10 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

You are,

you are a dangerous addiction

You are,

you are a needle in my vein

You are,

you are a virulent affliction

And I,

can't tell the pleasure from the pain

She blends herself into my blood and I can feel the burn
My body tingles from the rush, you'd think that I would learn
I know I cannot pay the price that comes with this desire
So I will sell my soul and dive headfirst into the fire...

You are,

you are a line upon a mirror

You are,

you are a habit sent from Hell

You are,

You are the Devil drawing nearer

And I,

will die a captive to your spell

Copyright © Rakerman1999 ... [ 2008-01-17 05:01:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by ribbons_and_lace09 on Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 06:04:19 AM AEST
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that is beyond amazing!!! many kudos to you! this is brilliantly written! keep up the good work!

Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 07:33:50 AM AEST
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Wow this is really good=]

Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 11:22:25 AM AEST
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Rakerman1999,

Good luck!

ron...enigma

Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 10:51:52 PM AEST
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Larry,

Always a pleasure to read the master. A compelling metre, subtle rhyme scheme and a dangerous topic indeed. Self destruction, yes, but oh so tempting...

S.

miscellaneous? (a category that shouldn't exist).

Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 11:13:28 AM AEST
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whew this could almost sting a little my friend.
I loved the way you used the spell of a woman like a drug to compare it to. That is sharp, your pen is still smoking........ Wishing we had a chance to talk I miss our long talks my friend and I miss you.

Roses at your feet,
petals in the air.....

Michelle

Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by sniffels on Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 03:45:02 AM AEST
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I really like this one Dad! Keep them coming! I want to read more. Love you!

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