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Array ( [sid] => 139178 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Numb [time] => 2007-12-14 18:36:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I took a picture in my mind
of your beautiful wondering eyes,
how i can feel them
hypnotizing me, and warming me
up with delite.
With my eyes shut tight
I remember how you would
take my hand,
showing them the way
to a wonderful peaceful state in time.
How your smile would numb my body
like a deer looking at a bright light,
how I would just melt with your soft
passionate kisses
oh, how I miss this...
I don't know how you would take me to
such wonderful bliss.
So many sweet dreams
I have of it all.
How your passion drove me insane,
because being with you toke away my pain.
All I can do now is,
close my eyes and wait
for the numbness to crawl upon my skin...

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 2 [informant] => bluestars [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Numb

Contributed by bluestars on Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 06:36:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I took a picture in my mind
of your beautiful wondering eyes,
how i can feel them
hypnotizing me, and warming me
up with delite.
With my eyes shut tight
I remember how you would
take my hand,
showing them the way
to a wonderful peaceful state in time.
How your smile would numb my body
like a deer looking at a bright light,
how I would just melt with your soft
passionate kisses
oh, how I miss this...
I don't know how you would take me to
such wonderful bliss.
So many sweet dreams
I have of it all.
How your passion drove me insane,
because being with you toke away my pain.
All I can do now is,
close my eyes and wait
for the numbness to crawl upon my skin...

Copyright © bluestars ... [ 2007-12-14 18:36:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Numb (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 05:05:19 AM AEST
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I am sorry I missed this but at the time you posted I was out on the road trucking. I have missed you being around. I hope now you have those passionate kisses and love always with you. Beautiful write as always.

Michelle

Re: Numb (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Friday, 10th May 2013 @ 10:08:55 PM AEST
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Ahh
loved this peaceful flow
nice......

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