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Array ( [sid] => 13915 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Wednesday's Cry [time] => 2003-03-07 23:40:00 [hometext] => No use to try [bodytext] => I don’t know where I’m going
I thought you would show me
This pain I cannot face
I want to get out of this place

I keep trying so hard
But I never get too far
I try but always in the end
The scars they always send

I wish I could say its alright
But I’m too tired to fight
I keep slipping away
I don’t think I can stay

You don’t need to worry
I’ll be leaving in a hurry
But now I can’t go on
I’m not that strong

You don’t even need to try
I’m gonna go off and die
I’ve done all that I could
But it will never be good

I sit and choke on my fear
Scream I don’t even belong here
Why do I have all this pain
What can I do to change?

I feel like I’m dying
I’m so sick of crying
Won’t you reach out your hand?
Won’t you please help me stand?

These lies I have to admit
I can’t go through it
I’ve been so sad for a while
I can’t even smile

I watch as you pass me by
I don’t want to cry
I wish that I could see you
But there’s no place for me to run to

I wish that I had the strength to say
I’ll see you on next Wednesday
My body aches and its all sore
How I wish I’d never been born

I’m so sorry but goodbye
I can no longer survive
I just hurt so much
My soul can’t take this crush [comments] => 3 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 36 [informant] => SpreadYourWings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Wednesday's Cry

Contributed by SpreadYourWings on Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I don’t know where I’m going
I thought you would show me
This pain I cannot face
I want to get out of this place

I keep trying so hard
But I never get too far
I try but always in the end
The scars they always send

I wish I could say its alright
But I’m too tired to fight
I keep slipping away
I don’t think I can stay

You don’t need to worry
I’ll be leaving in a hurry
But now I can’t go on
I’m not that strong

You don’t even need to try
I’m gonna go off and die
I’ve done all that I could
But it will never be good

I sit and choke on my fear
Scream I don’t even belong here
Why do I have all this pain
What can I do to change?

I feel like I’m dying
I’m so sick of crying
Won’t you reach out your hand?
Won’t you please help me stand?

These lies I have to admit
I can’t go through it
I’ve been so sad for a while
I can’t even smile

I watch as you pass me by
I don’t want to cry
I wish that I could see you
But there’s no place for me to run to

I wish that I had the strength to say
I’ll see you on next Wednesday
My body aches and its all sore
How I wish I’d never been born

I’m so sorry but goodbye
I can no longer survive
I just hurt so much
My soul can’t take this crush




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Re: Wednesday's Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 12:27:19 AM AEST
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Wow... I really like this part...

I feel like I’m dying
I’m so sick of crying
Won’t you reach out your hand?
Won’t you please help me stand?

Sad, but great job.

~ Moonlit Angel


Re: Wednesday's Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Metalmouth666 on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 01:30:52 AM AEST
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Wow as well... I like the poem, it has great thought into it.
"You don’t even need to try
I’m gonna go off and die
I’ve done all that I could
But it will never be good"
it seams the same with me sometimes, mostly the last two lines, I may have done the best that I could have, but to others it's not ever good enough...


Re: Wednesday's Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Love_impossible on Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 08:41:45 PM AEST
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None of us chose to be born, but the real challenge is trying to survive, but my idea of surviving can't be done within this society.
It seems hopeless sometimes....and maybe it is, but maybe not




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