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Array ( [sid] => 138996 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I... [time] => 2007-12-05 11:15:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The days we spent together
Are just a fading memory
I know you used to love
But you no longer care for me
You didn’t care you hurt
You left without a thought
The hurt and pain you’ve caused
That wasn’t what you were taught
I hate the lies you told me
I hate the tears I cry
I hate myself for everything
I hate that I’m alive
I wish this pain would vanish
I wish my life would end
I wish I hadn’t believed in you
I wish that we were friends…
I miss you as I lay awake
I miss you as I sleep
I miss you when I take a breath
I miss you when I weep
I take it all the best I can
I take it against my will
I take too many drinks at night
I take too many pills
I take the hate you generate
I take your ******* wrath
But tonight to end it all
Ill take my toaster in my bath…
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 399 [topic] => 36 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => Edited for violation of site rule #5. - Moderator_14 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
I...

Contributed by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 11:15:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



The days we spent together
Are just a fading memory
I know you used to love
But you no longer care for me
You didn’t care you hurt
You left without a thought
The hurt and pain you’ve caused
That wasn’t what you were taught
I hate the lies you told me
I hate the tears I cry
I hate myself for everything
I hate that I’m alive
I wish this pain would vanish
I wish my life would end
I wish I hadn’t believed in you
I wish that we were friends…
I miss you as I lay awake
I miss you as I sleep
I miss you when I take a breath
I miss you when I weep
I take it all the best I can
I take it against my will
I take too many drinks at night
I take too many pills
I take the hate you generate
I take your ******* wrath
But tonight to end it all
Ill take my toaster in my bath…




Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2007-12-05 11:15:53]
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Re: I... (User Rating: 1 )
by meadcomposition on Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 12:18:26 PM AEST
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I liked this until the end. It reminds me of something that could maybe be turned into a song..minus the end. But, it WAS good. And I actually know how you feel..


Re: I... (User Rating: 1 )
by TheGrimReapersHourglass on Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 12:49:22 PM AEST
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Forever In My Secrete-I would like to comment it is a very powerful poem-Just a toast can be made-I Have Been Around For A Long Long Year Met Many Man And Fate-From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L.Jr.


Re: I... (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 02:08:28 PM AEST
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OMG Chris.......Dont ever do so...Not over anyone
Your a gifted person with a s soul...I dont know if you member me or not, But I havent forgot YOU!.......So you dont forget YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!EVER...................... This is so powerful and heart clinching.......its NOT worth it..........

HUGS
brew~


Re: I... (User Rating: 1 )
by ki on Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 01:25:30 AM AEST
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This would make a great song..sad song,but a good song..nice job!!




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