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Array ( [sid] => 138592 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever Still [time] => 2007-11-17 19:19:26 [hometext] => This is a new post from me in months, I felt It was to a slower tune with A Violin and Piano mix, let me know what you think... It's about a couple that separates and he still feels love towards her. [bodytext] => Where are you, going.
Can you, not stay, with me one more day?
Where I'd, know that you'd be okay,
Where all of our troubles, are washed away.
Where are you , you going... today.

If you, were ever in my heart,
It sure hurts today, the moment we parted
I just need to know that you'll be okay
If we never see each other again.
Where are you, you going... today.

By all of my powers,
I could not make you stay.
my heart weeps for you,
when you walked away.
I know, that it may not be forever.
but for you, my heart beats still.

(Break)

I just need to know that you'll be okay
If we never see each other again
Where are you, you going... today.

If we, never see, each other again,
I want, you to know, I'll be okay.
how will you live your days
will you be okay?
I just, need to know, you'll be okay
If we, never see, each other again

By all of my powers,
I could not make you stay.
My heart weeps for you,
but I must let you free.
I know, that it may, not be forever.
but for you, my heart, beats forever still...
Forever still. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 34 [informant] => silver_crested_shadow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Forever Still

Contributed by silver_crested_shadow on Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 07:19:26 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Where are you, going.
Can you, not stay, with me one more day?
Where I'd, know that you'd be okay,
Where all of our troubles, are washed away.
Where are you , you going... today.

If you, were ever in my heart,
It sure hurts today, the moment we parted
I just need to know that you'll be okay
If we never see each other again.
Where are you, you going... today.

By all of my powers,
I could not make you stay.
my heart weeps for you,
when you walked away.
I know, that it may not be forever.
but for you, my heart beats still.

(Break)

I just need to know that you'll be okay
If we never see each other again
Where are you, you going... today.

If we, never see, each other again,
I want, you to know, I'll be okay.
how will you live your days
will you be okay?
I just, need to know, you'll be okay
If we, never see, each other again

By all of my powers,
I could not make you stay.
My heart weeps for you,
but I must let you free.
I know, that it may, not be forever.
but for you, my heart, beats forever still...
Forever still.




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Re: Forever Still (User Rating: 1 )
by simonedontplay on Sunday, 18th November 2007 @ 01:49:50 AM AEST
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i love it, i liked how it flowed, it was smooth, an you could feel the rhythm , it was great


Re: Forever Still (User Rating: 1 )
by TheGrimReapersHourglass on Sunday, 18th November 2007 @ 02:46:51 AM AEST
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The poem -Forever Still-brought back memories Hourglass#8 is About A Girl last past relationship never ending and been as long as a full term I kept my part. Great Poetry FromThe Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD. Denver L.




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