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Array ( [sid] => 138438 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why? [time] => 2007-11-12 05:21:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why was it you who loved me?
for me, you were crazy and in need

I thought I could be there and you be here
when was it that it was you I feared
Even now and today it's you I need here

Why did you come into my life
when you broke your mirror and used it as a knife
when you disappeared that week i thought you died
But I knew it was only me who lied

In four days it will be a year
And still it's you i will fear

Why did you love me
Why couldn't you leave me be
Now it's only you I wish to see

Just because of you i had to leave
and with my mother I wanted to flee

Not the country, Just the city
Not past the boundary, just a little bitty ways away

All I want to know is
Why was it me?
you wanted to see

I think I'll go and drown in the sea [comments] => 1 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 52 [informant] => sensible_paper [notes] => |||Edited for spelling, as requested. - Moderator_14||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Why?

Contributed by sensible_paper on Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 05:21:22 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Why was it you who loved me?
for me, you were crazy and in need

I thought I could be there and you be here
when was it that it was you I feared
Even now and today it's you I need here

Why did you come into my life
when you broke your mirror and used it as a knife
when you disappeared that week i thought you died
But I knew it was only me who lied

In four days it will be a year
And still it's you i will fear

Why did you love me
Why couldn't you leave me be
Now it's only you I wish to see

Just because of you i had to leave
and with my mother I wanted to flee

Not the country, Just the city
Not past the boundary, just a little bitty ways away

All I want to know is
Why was it me?
you wanted to see

I think I'll go and drown in the sea

Copyright © sensible_paper ... [ 2007-11-12 05:21:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Why? (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 11:18:48 AM AEST
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awsum write tiff, is it about ur dad or someone else?
keep it up!

Jenni xxoo

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