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His touch is softer than silk,
His smell is sented like flowers,
And his eyes...

His voice is like soft music,
His walk is like heanen with feet,
His hair is so soft and free,
And his arms...

His presence is calming and subtle,
His words are gentle and nice,
His movements are fast and surprising,
And his humor...

His eyes see straight through my soul,
His arms hold me tight and secure,
His humor is constant and funny,
And his love...

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Real Fantasy

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

His kiss is sweeter than chocolate,
His touch is softer than silk,
His smell is sented like flowers,
And his eyes...

His voice is like soft music,
His walk is like heanen with feet,
His hair is so soft and free,
And his arms...

His presence is calming and subtle,
His words are gentle and nice,
His movements are fast and surprising,
And his humor...

His eyes see straight through my soul,
His arms hold me tight and secure,
His humor is constant and funny,
And his love...

...is just for me.

Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2003-03-06 10:30:00]
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Re: Real Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by ManowarManiac on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 06:39:38 PM AEST
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I wish a chick would write me a poem this lovely and refreshing, no one ever has. I have written many a poem for every chick I have dated, and I hope you will read a few of them and tell me what you think, I would really appreciate the opinion of someone as talented as you are.

Re: Real Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 08:00:54 PM AEST
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Hey, I thought you said you didn't know me very well Candice??;-))
We do exist, you just have to look really, really hard because we tend to be hidden in obscure parts of the world!! hehehe only kiddin'.

Excellent write here, I liked the way you didn't finish each stanza with a rhyme, you appear to have left that up to the reader. Which very cleverly makes one think deeper about your words!

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Real Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 08:11:10 PM AEST
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Dean, I am glad that you like this one. This was a new style for me, and I kind of like it. This poem turned out really well.

I know that the perfect guy is out there. I just have to keep looking. My mom found hers. And I might have found my in Shadows if I ever tell him how I feel.
ShadowsCloud

Re: Real Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by twinkletoes on Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 09:15:51 PM AEST
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I love it! You draw your reader in with those lines that are incomplete.
Terrifico!!!!!!!!!!

Re: Real Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by Apartment213 on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 05:31:54 PM AEST
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yeah hey finally a girl writing a poem about a guy. i have wrote tons of poems/songs about girls, ur poem is refreshing thank you for sharing.

Re: Real Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 07:07:33 PM AEST
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Almost all of my poems are about one guy or another. So if you are intrested ing reading more like this read my other poems.
ShadowsCloud

Re: Real Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 11:19:25 AM AEST
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very good write..enjoyable..
Sharon

Re: Real Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 02:16:10 AM AEST
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Absolute honey.

Like a drink od cold water at the end of a long hot march.

Is being a woman that good?

If there were such men ........perhaps.

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