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[aid] => mick
[title] => QUESTIONING U AND ME
[time] => 2007-10-15 20:53:56
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[bodytext] => This is for anyone HURT by LOVE....either REAL or FAKE
i wrote this a month ago but the feelings are RECENT
i was always there for you
you were my life, so what went wrong
you always said you loved me
but you were lying all along
i thought i called you love
a blessing in diguise
my angel up from heaven
the twinkle in my eye
its only been a year
but i was givin you my life
you found interest in other girls
one particulary your type
i thought i called you love
my strength when i am weak
the guidance in my life
the half to my complete
you said she was just an ex
she was nothing else to me
but there is something still there
some things that you cant see
how could i be so foolish
i was so dumb from the start
since the begining of us
your job was to break my heart
im such a foolish girl to claim
what i thought was ours
but jokingly in you and hers
my head was in the clouds
she says that she claims you
so now i am confused
whether this is what i want
do i want to be with you
i change for you my everything
something i thought was real
but eversince we been together
HURT is all i feel
im so done with all these lies
and all this bulll.s type of mess
this you and her,,,,and her and you
is just way to much stress
you will always be the same
and she will always be to
so from my heart i sincerly say
i dont want to be with you
we can always be friends
i will always be there for you
but im sick of this and sick of her
and definilty sick of you
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[informant] => jojo89
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QUESTIONING U AND ME
Contributed by
jojo89
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Monday, 15th October 2007 @ 08:53:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This is for anyone HURT by LOVE....either REAL or FAKE
i wrote this a month ago but the feelings are RECENT
i was always there for you
you were my life, so what went wrong
you always said you loved me
but you were lying all along
i thought i called you love
a blessing in diguise
my angel up from heaven
the twinkle in my eye
its only been a year
but i was givin you my life
you found interest in other girls
one particulary your type
i thought i called you love
my strength when i am weak
the guidance in my life
the half to my complete
you said she was just an ex
she was nothing else to me
but there is something still there
some things that you cant see
how could i be so foolish
i was so dumb from the start
since the begining of us
your job was to break my heart
im such a foolish girl to claim
what i thought was ours
but jokingly in you and hers
my head was in the clouds
she says that she claims you
so now i am confused
whether this is what i want
do i want to be with you
i change for you my everything
something i thought was real
but eversince we been together
HURT is all i feel
im so done with all these lies
and all this bulll.s type of mess
this you and her,,,,and her and you
is just way to much stress
you will always be the same
and she will always be to
so from my heart i sincerly say
i dont want to be with you
we can always be friends
i will always be there for you
but im sick of this and sick of her
and definilty sick of you
Copyright ©
jojo89
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2007-10-15 20:53:56]
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Re: QUESTIONING U AND ME
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th October 2007 @ 09:35:05 AM AEST
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love does suck...
beautifully written. =]
- Bethani - |
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Re: QUESTIONING U AND ME
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 10:04:27 AM AEST
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Love isn't true when one gives and the other only receives.
I'm sure one day you will find that special person who will truly light the fire in you
Steve |
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Re: QUESTIONING U AND ME
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by missyboo on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 11:44:10 AM AEST
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| so i read all your poems and i don't understand this one if you are dating the cards of a player then whats up with this poem anyway i had some questions are you really her girlfriend because your poems and hears are so different opposite very how long have you'll been dating and somebody like that you betta keep to put down her cards for you is love if you don't want her then give her to me please because i've been hurt by men and women but damn the most by men them dirty ass dogs and i could use somebody like cards of a player plus i know you lying because one of her poems are linda love and your not her so find your own jo jo and leave my future husband alone because i will get her as soon as she replys back to my comment i can be her wife bye bye |
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Re: QUESTIONING U AND ME
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by missyboo on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 11:34:18 AM AEST
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| i want to know why you so press for her ***** ***** make a poem about her and i'll do minds if you are on good terms then i hope you really stay with her because she needs someone thats going to be there and show love and stop (sensor) opps i mean censored everything ***** cassie 4 linda can be yours for now bye bye |
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Re: QUESTIONING U AND ME
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by missyboo on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 12:04:23 PM AEST
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| you press for her please hop off bunny you saying you have her for life your be with her for life then you too make a poem about each other then prove me wron your punk ass girl want even comment you must not be with her she have'nt said nothing bunny hop off |
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Re: QUESTIONING U AND ME
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by missyboo on
Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 11:32:20 AM AEST
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| a miss jo jo 89 i see you still don't have no proof and cards of a player commented me back and she wants to know more about me ha ha ha top that now ***** |
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Re: QUESTIONING U AND ME
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by missyboo on
Tuesday, 4th December 2007 @ 10:29:56 AM AEST
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| your crazy ass ***** ass girlfriend wrote a poem about me when all i have been was nice to her ass and her poem so you can keep her and hope you stay together sike fucck your relationship |
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Re: QUESTIONING U AND ME
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by missyboo on
Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 10:02:30 AM AEST
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these ar some tips to make sure that your fiancee on the next go chance that you give her to make sure she stay with only you please reply back i can help you with dealing with her because you want her you do love is deep and no one wants to be friends give it three weeks to play this game and if she falls on her knees and ask you back before the end of the month take her but give the one last time rules and she better do it
1 Let her call you because she is wrong if she is. Don't call her unless she called you first
2 Make her do everything for you when she come over if she donn't come around she never care
3 Tease her with something cute to wear show her what shes been missing
4 Make her pay for every thing because when you helped out she did't apperciate it
5 Ask her how much do you miss me and any routine you do you funk up the routine hours later so she gets ***** play these girl games just to see if she can take it and if she stays around she wants you bad and she will regret what she did and will respect you because you deserve it
Try it two of my friends tryed it and it works plus valentine day is on the way and you deserve that because you love her you just want her to change and you two are meant for each other your zodiac are perfect i know |
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Re: QUESTIONING U AND ME
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by missyboo on
Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 12:05:02 PM AEST
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| hey responed to me i can help you out from the good and bad feelings try the chart |
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Re: QUESTIONING U AND ME
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by missyboo on
Sunday, 6th January 2008 @ 02:24:05 PM AEST
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| a friend once told me that if you love somebody then you give them another chance for the new year i bet you ask me why i stay around texting you and i'm a pscy who see the future and you too hav been through somuch but its a new year and she will changei feel it but you have to but things in the past because it want help love is painful and sometimes happy but she loves you it say it in your zoadic give her one more chance new year and you know what your problems are wit the relationship you don't need no oneto tell you trust me you can work out things try before its too late somebodys is trying to get in between to have her and shes a good girlfriend just needs to work on cheating but its a new year and she feels your pain shes hurting too just so you know reply back to me please i can answer your question |
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Re: QUESTIONING U AND ME
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by missyboo on
Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 10:00:29 AM AEST
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| so your are back together now put things in the past try work together and things get better your zodiac are very stronge aries and cancers are powerful love is the key word now show it she trying give her the support that a she needs watch things will get better through the year once you overcome 4 months the rest will go by easy |
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