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that I can see
To the shadows in life
that fall on me

And there is no place
that I can hide
From all this pain
that there is inside

And of all the dreams
long faded now
and all the things
in life gone foul

And all the truths
I held so dear
have fallen asunder
the growing fear

of the changing tides
of time and fate
in a world so full
of rage filled hate

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An evenings plunder

Contributed by wordsy on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

There is no end
that I can see
To the shadows in life
that fall on me

And there is no place
that I can hide
From all this pain
that there is inside

And of all the dreams
long faded now
and all the things
in life gone foul

And all the truths
I held so dear
have fallen asunder
the growing fear

of the changing tides
of time and fate
in a world so full
of rage filled hate

Copyright © wordsy ... [ 2003-03-05 14:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: An evenings plunder (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 05:18:34 PM AEST
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Very well written wordsy ... I enjoyed this very much.

Re: An evenings plunder (User Rating: 1 )
by Percursors on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 07:40:06 PM AEST
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True, true...Great write...

Re: An evenings plunder (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:40:38 PM AEST
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hmm..kind of wistful about one's life 'til i got to the end...then it seemed so much deeper and about the world.......huggs always nessa

Re: An evenings plunder (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:43:17 PM AEST
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A lot of dark feelings in this that could reflect on alot of us! Good write! Christina

Re: An evenings plunder (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 01:13:44 AM AEST
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wonderful write and meaningful title..sun sets in the evening .but he rises on the next day morning.. Thank you for sharing a beautiful dark poem. venkat

Re: An evenings plunder (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 10:47:09 AM AEST
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How...in so few and simple words...do you manage to convey such deep feelings?

You're talent runs deep as do your thoughts my friend. Bar keeper!!!! Fix my pal here up with a drink...he deserves it.

Re: An evenings plunder (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:37:14 AM AEST
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great write, as always your poetry stands out

Re: An evenings plunder (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 11:10:37 AM AEST
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excellent write, hugs nessa

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