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Array ( [sid] => 13699 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => random thoughts in my head [time] => 2003-03-04 07:30:00 [hometext] => i want every one who reads this to think. When you see somebody just sitting looking at somebody or something what are they really thinking. i went around and "gathered thoughts" or so to say. this is what i came up with after only 30 minutes. i hope you like it!

-Jennifer Robin [bodytext] => am I pretty, am I too fat
what will he think of me
what can I wear without looking ugly
what will my friends think
my hair is too thick
my hair is too curly
my teeth aren't straight
my ears are uneven
do I have a good heart
what will i look like in five years
what will i look like in twenty years
why am i nice to those who hurt me most
I love him
i wish i had her hair
he has pretty eyes
what does he think of me
what will he think of me if i .....
i wish i looked like that
does he love me as much as i love him
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 43 [informant] => ichiban_girl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

random thoughts in my head

Contributed by ichiban_girl on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

am I pretty, am I too fat
what will he think of me
what can I wear without looking ugly
what will my friends think
my hair is too thick
my hair is too curly
my teeth aren't straight
my ears are uneven
do I have a good heart
what will i look like in five years
what will i look like in twenty years
why am i nice to those who hurt me most
I love him
i wish i had her hair
he has pretty eyes
what does he think of me
what will he think of me if i .....
i wish i looked like that
does he love me as much as i love him

Copyright © ichiban_girl ... [ 2003-03-04 07:30:00]
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Re: random thoughts in my head (User Rating: 1 )
by starlight on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 08:42:06 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this.So very true as to what goes through our minds. Good write

Re: random thoughts in my head (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:21:03 PM AEST
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lol i enjoyed this a lot, i sit in my car waiting for my son in a store sometimes and these thoughts run through my head when i see ppls eyes as well, good one, huggs nessa

Re: random thoughts in my head (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 02:54:14 PM AEST
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Jen, this is so true...I enjoyed this a lot.. makes one really think some more....
Jenni

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