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Array ( [sid] => 136807 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Quiet Entertainer [time] => 2007-08-18 06:00:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm sorry if I watch you sleep
I would be lying if I said
"It does not occur for me.
My eyes close and I wake the next day.
Nothing happens inbetween."

I will pet you with a rhythm so slow
You will begin to breathe in time

Music was her world
In a dream she see's...
Unless you find one of the sounds and touch it
You'll sleep forever
Even though you know the answer

She wakes from the dream
Sitting up and says
"How many chances do I get?"

"One a day, one an hour, minute or moment.
Just be yourself" he responds

"Why?" she questions

"Because it's beautiful" he responds

"So cessation of suffering can occur before death?
It takes a great person to hear the prayers of millions"

"Yes" he said

"Were only passengers"
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Quiet Entertainer

Contributed by trueecho on Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 06:00:17 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I'm sorry if I watch you sleep
I would be lying if I said
"It does not occur for me.
My eyes close and I wake the next day.
Nothing happens inbetween."

I will pet you with a rhythm so slow
You will begin to breathe in time

Music was her world
In a dream she see's...
Unless you find one of the sounds and touch it
You'll sleep forever
Even though you know the answer

She wakes from the dream
Sitting up and says
"How many chances do I get?"

"One a day, one an hour, minute or moment.
Just be yourself" he responds

"Why?" she questions

"Because it's beautiful" he responds

"So cessation of suffering can occur before death?
It takes a great person to hear the prayers of millions"

"Yes" he said

"Were only passengers"

Copyright © trueecho ... [ 2007-08-18 06:00:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Quiet Entertainer (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 06:08:03 AM AEST
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Just beautifull freind, almost made me cry...

well woven word and very emotive..

fantastic!!!

zenith66

Re: Quiet Entertainer (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 01:12:28 PM AEST
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so different yet so clear
beauty
lovely write

endless

Re: Quiet Entertainer (User Rating: 1 )
by tiggytom on Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 03:23:47 AM AEST
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Liked it Nice read

Tom

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