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Array ( [sid] => 136652 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Laura lied [time] => 2007-08-11 01:11:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
I remember thunder
and lightning in the air
And I recall just how you looked
when I saw you standing there

But what I remember most
and it almost makes me cry
I remember how it felt
when my Laura lied

Laura lied,
and it tore my world into
Laura lied,
and left me wondering what to do
now as she stands before me
and I look into her eyes
All I can remember is
how my Laura lied

Laura lied

Twenty years ago, almost to the day
an still all these teardrops
will not go away
And every time I've cried
I still feel inside
how well that I remember
just how my Laura lied

Laura lied,
and it tore my world into
Laura lied,
and left me wondering what to do
now as she stands before me
and I look into her eyes
all I can remember is
how my Laura lied

Laura lied

Now as she stands before me
I don't know what to say
as my mind slowly drifts back
to another day
When I was just a young man
with a heart that broke into
the day you lied and left me
wondering what to do

Laura lied,
and it tore my world into
Laura lied,
and now I don't know what to do
for as she stands before me
with arms both open wide
All I can remember is
how my Laura lied

Laura lied.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 22 [informant] => wordsy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Laura lied

Contributed by wordsy on Saturday, 11th August 2007 @ 01:11:36 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I remember thunder
and lightning in the air
And I recall just how you looked
when I saw you standing there

But what I remember most
and it almost makes me cry
I remember how it felt
when my Laura lied

Laura lied,
and it tore my world into
Laura lied,
and left me wondering what to do
now as she stands before me
and I look into her eyes
All I can remember is
how my Laura lied

Laura lied

Twenty years ago, almost to the day
an still all these teardrops
will not go away
And every time I've cried
I still feel inside
how well that I remember
just how my Laura lied

Laura lied,
and it tore my world into
Laura lied,
and left me wondering what to do
now as she stands before me
and I look into her eyes
all I can remember is
how my Laura lied

Laura lied

Now as she stands before me
I don't know what to say
as my mind slowly drifts back
to another day
When I was just a young man
with a heart that broke into
the day you lied and left me
wondering what to do

Laura lied,
and it tore my world into
Laura lied,
and now I don't know what to do
for as she stands before me
with arms both open wide
All I can remember is
how my Laura lied

Laura lied.

Copyright © wordsy ... [ 2007-08-11 01:11:36]
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Re: Laura lied (User Rating: 1 )
by Adreana on Saturday, 11th August 2007 @ 01:25:47 AM AEST
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Hard to forget when someone you love betrays you or is dishonest. Really stinks. But the write is GREAT! :) Thanks for lying, Laura. Otherwise we wouldn't have this lovely poem :)

Re: Laura lied (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 10:08:55 PM AEST
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The pain of deceit and lies seems to haunt all souls....a wonderful piece to reflect how painful this can be.

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