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Array ( [sid] => 136508 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just leave, Please Go [time] => 2007-08-05 13:25:03 [hometext] => just how i feel about someone right now [bodytext] => The recollection of your words hit me like knives
All at once, but slowly taking their time
Eventually they’ll sink in, but hopefully not now
I’m too content for the changes to come just now

The constant charade we keep playing is going to have to end
One round after the other, where’s the fun in all of this?
Maybe it’s being connected to you somehow I don’t know
I can see you still love me and yes, it does show

I’m so lost in what we have I don’t know left from right
I’d do anything just to have you close to me or in my sight
The pictures are the worst for me, because we should be in them together
Now I don’t know if we’ll even be seen one another

Just leave
Please just go
The quicker you do the sooner I can move on
But stay with me until eternity if you will
Just stay
Please remain
Oh honey please just go
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Just leave, Please Go

Contributed by scarlettdear on Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 01:25:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

The recollection of your words hit me like knives
All at once, but slowly taking their time
Eventually they’ll sink in, but hopefully not now
I’m too content for the changes to come just now

The constant charade we keep playing is going to have to end
One round after the other, where’s the fun in all of this?
Maybe it’s being connected to you somehow I don’t know
I can see you still love me and yes, it does show

I’m so lost in what we have I don’t know left from right
I’d do anything just to have you close to me or in my sight
The pictures are the worst for me, because we should be in them together
Now I don’t know if we’ll even be seen one another

Just leave
Please just go
The quicker you do the sooner I can move on
But stay with me until eternity if you will
Just stay
Please remain
Oh honey please just go

Copyright Â© scarlettdear ... [ 2007-08-05 13:25:03]
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Re: Just leave, Please Go (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 01:51:39 PM AEST
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A very dynamic write.
I can certainlly relate.
Awesome work.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Just leave, Please Go (User Rating: 1 )
by madhusudan on Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 12:45:45 AM AEST
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someone once told me...a person in a relationship will only leave it...if the other person has cheated or there is another option available to him/her...and i dont know but i feel u are in the waitin for someone better thing...u still want someone to comfort you...and yet you dont want the baggages that come with this pain

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