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[aid] => mick
[title] => chains
[time] => 2007-08-04 11:57:49
[hometext] =>
[bodytext] => wraped so tight in your armes like chanes in the dark around my chest im held here like ive never left im never going to move wraped so tight in your words like chanes in the dark around my chest never let them go held onto the lock no wont let hem let me go ill beleave the chains they speek no lies im in denial all the while i lived in this hope that i knew would die no blame to you defending you like chains kepeing me from falling to my death, the only bit of life i have left. but then it rained and raind and raind the rust the chanins the rust it couldnt hold, them chains gave way, just b4 the fire died ok so this is the first pome ive ever writen if you can call it a pome as far as i know a pome is an expression more then a set of rules that you have to follow so i guess it could be but i would like to touch it up a bit with punctuation exc im in a hury right now and i only have a few days have this ready if you havent figured it out its about someone i truely love who is gone im not shur if im gona give it to her but yea anyway if anyone understands it and can fix it up a bit i dont want the meaning changed but like i know there should be more lines in it then there are i just dont know where to put them some help on that would be good and maby a slight change in wording. also the last part of it has alot of meaning very improtant there was a point in time where i told her that i would rather burn then fall (in otherwords go through everthing shes puting me through to be there for her and be with her no mater what) and just so you know i left her but its not cause i dont wana be there just wondering if it expresses that and i was wondering if you people can i guess you can say desipher it so shell know exactly what it means if i do give it to her but i have to go i will explain more about this if anyone is intrested to know what it means but yea im in a hurry so untill then i bid you good night [comments] => 3 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 22 [informant] => 10_000days [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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