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Array ( [sid] => 136480 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What's wrong with me [time] => 2007-08-04 08:39:00 [hometext] => I've lived down here a little over two years now...I have finally found my soul-mate, My fiancee, Brandon. I dont know why Ive changed so much here lately. Theres nothing I can blame. im sorry brandon....your my world [bodytext] => I’ve fallen harder than I ever have before
Didn’t think these tears could flow anymore
But they do

I’m so lost in the darkness I’ve created
All the passion I’ve anticipated
Has died now

I wish I could start over
I used to swear I wouldn’t be like her
But I am

I wish you could mold me to fit your life
I wish for you I could be the perfect wife
I just don’t know anymore ‘cause

I’m not your dream girl.
I’m not the one you fell for.
I’m a horrible mess now.
What is wrong with me…?

I wish I could be better, baby...
I try so hard but I just don’t know what to do.
I think of me and I think of you…
I’m just so sorry…

Don’t cry for me
Don’t die for me
Don’t leave for me
Don’t bleed for me
Don’t live for me
Don’t wish for me
Don’t do anything for me
‘Cause I cant do anything for you

All I can say is
I love you…
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 48 [informant] => crazylady [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
What's wrong with me

Contributed by crazylady on Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 08:39:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I’ve fallen harder than I ever have before
Didn’t think these tears could flow anymore
But they do

I’m so lost in the darkness I’ve created
All the passion I’ve anticipated
Has died now

I wish I could start over
I used to swear I wouldn’t be like her
But I am

I wish you could mold me to fit your life
I wish for you I could be the perfect wife
I just don’t know anymore ‘cause

I’m not your dream girl.
I’m not the one you fell for.
I’m a horrible mess now.
What is wrong with me…?

I wish I could be better, baby...
I try so hard but I just don’t know what to do.
I think of me and I think of you…
I’m just so sorry…

Don’t cry for me
Don’t die for me
Don’t leave for me
Don’t bleed for me
Don’t live for me
Don’t wish for me
Don’t do anything for me
‘Cause I cant do anything for you

All I can say is
I love you…




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Re: What's wrong with me (User Rating: 1 )
by Xmorbid6childrnx on Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 01:54:03 PM AEST
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Aww,
....
I feel like this sometimes,
the feeling is horrible...
and when you cant control it
you get confused.
you get caught up.

your an amazing writer and im sure your and amazing wife...

dont be so hard on your self.. you only get one chance to live


Re: What's wrong with me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 02:54:26 PM AEST
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a tragic love feeling poem, hrm...you are an amazing writer, the fact that i could feel some of your emotion proves that. so many times people categorize their poems as emotional, angry, happy, etc...but their poem is lost on others not feeling what they feel.

people constantly change throughout their life times. if your fiancee expects you to stay the same person from however long ago he met you, then he is delusional. to marry is to accept the good and the bad in the person, the person that is always changing.




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