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Array ( [sid] => 136135 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To Cut [time] => 2007-07-21 16:34:18 [hometext] => This poem is really intense, its about cutting. Umm please tell me what you think, I like the flow of it personally. [bodytext] => I watch myself
Watch me bleed slowly
Cutting again
Wishfully hoping
Trying to stop
Yet it urges to move
Forward still
Making a groove.
It keeps getting deeper
Into my flesh
Tearing away
All the pain that is left.
Replacing my heart
With its metallic sharp edge
I watch it cut deeper
Into its wedge.
Unable to stop myself
I continue to watch myself
Watch the blood flow,
the evil wisp out.
There is no love
Not anymore
Not threw all these
Torn fleshy doors.
Nothing but pain
Physical replacing mental,
The pain that’s inside
Replaces my mind
If I hurt myself
Then it isnt a crime.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 76 [informant] => Shattered_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => obsession )

To Cut

Contributed by Shattered_soul on Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 04:34:18 PM in AEST
Topic: obsession

I watch myself
Watch me bleed slowly
Cutting again
Wishfully hoping
Trying to stop
Yet it urges to move
Forward still
Making a groove.
It keeps getting deeper
Into my flesh
Tearing away
All the pain that is left.
Replacing my heart
With its metallic sharp edge
I watch it cut deeper
Into its wedge.
Unable to stop myself
I continue to watch myself
Watch the blood flow,
the evil wisp out.
There is no love
Not anymore
Not threw all these
Torn fleshy doors.
Nothing but pain
Physical replacing mental,
The pain that’s inside
Replaces my mind
If I hurt myself
Then it isnt a crime.

Copyright Â© Shattered_soul ... [ 2007-07-21 16:34:18]
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Re: To Cut (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 05:12:21 PM AEST
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I've never understood why people do this, but this was a nice write. The flow does go well.

Re: To Cut (User Rating: 1 )
by physcoquack on Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 04:30:41 AM AEST
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good work on that it really puts out there what poeple are thinking when they cut it
puts it all out in the open so everyone can understand it

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