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Array ( [sid] => 136026 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ******* Emo's [time] => 2007-07-17 09:12:15 [hometext] => I was really emo when i wrote this, and I hate knowing I am emo, Please read it and tell me your thoughts. [bodytext] => Its times like these

Where I hate the most

People like me

Those ***** emo's

They cry and they *****

They cut while they twitch

They take all the *****

With an ounce of grit

And that night

They hate themselves for it.

I wish I wasn't me

I wish I was smiling

And even though I think about you

I cant seem to do so.

I wish and I *****

And yet I cry again

Depression sets in

And nothing can help.

Just let me be

Alone again.

Hush

While I sleep in peace.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Shattered_soul [notes] => Mod 9 7/16/07 Bleep word. Please bleep the whole word. Thanks [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

******* Emo's

Contributed by Shattered_soul on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 09:12:15 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Its times like these

Where I hate the most

People like me

Those ***** emo's

They cry and they *****

They cut while they twitch

They take all the *****

With an ounce of grit

And that night

They hate themselves for it.

I wish I wasn't me

I wish I was smiling

And even though I think about you

I cant seem to do so.

I wish and I *****

And yet I cry again

Depression sets in

And nothing can help.

Just let me be

Alone again.

Hush

While I sleep in peace.

Copyright © Shattered_soul ... [ 2007-07-17 09:12:15]
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Re: ******* Emo's (User Rating: 1 )
by physcoquack on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 03:47:26 PM AEST
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i find that it reallty puts an image in my mind of what pain can do to a person what it makes them think and feel

Re: ******* Emo's (User Rating: 1 )
by yackerz85 on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 11:49:48 PM AEST
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I really don't have a problem with emo people because I can usually understand what they go through. Everyone feels depression, heartache, and despondency at some point in their lives. There are periods where I feel pretty "emo" myself. However, what helps me overcome this phase is keeping others in perspective. There are so many people in the world that are so much worse off than you, and most likely have greater reasons to be depressed and give up altogether, but these people strive to overcome the pitfalls in their lives. And remember there are millions of people who would switch lives with you in the world, no matter how screwed up you say your life is.

Re: ******* Emo's (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 12:22:29 AM AEST
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this is a well written poem except for the stared out places.. it would be even more powerful if there wasn't those missing words.. its a good poem though.

Rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: ******* Emo's (User Rating: 1 )
by seafire on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 08:24:18 AM AEST
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WOW SHATTERED ,
YOU sound as though you hate yourself and wish you could be anyone else but you . you know my daughter use to wish she was someone else also. things in life can make us upset or mad or hurt but this is a good write and i liked it alot i do hope your feeling not so mad
mare

Re: ******* Emo's (User Rating: 1 )
by seafire on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 08:24:21 AM AEST
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WOW SHATTERED ,
YOU sound as though you hate yourself and wish you could be anyone else but you . you know my daughter use to wish she was someone else also. things in life can make us upset or mad or hurt but this is a good write and i liked it alot i do hope your feeling not so mad
mare

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