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amidst the tree’s
a gathering of moonlight
strangers we were never
our whispers were heard before
darkness, our embedded atonement
worshipping the shadows, our life the shore
our blood shed, making us pure, we are delivered
perfect balance teetering us between two worlds
our eyes locked we linger, we know each other"s souls
pure is the cleansing of the journey, meet us there

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ghost whisper

Contributed by ghostwhisper on Saturday, 30th June 2007 @ 11:20:23 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

In case we meet
amidst the tree’s
a gathering of moonlight
strangers we were never
our whispers were heard before
darkness, our embedded atonement
worshipping the shadows, our life the shore
our blood shed, making us pure, we are delivered
perfect balance teetering us between two worlds
our eyes locked we linger, we know each other"s souls
pure is the cleansing of the journey, meet us there

Copyright Â© ghostwhisper ... [ 2007-06-30 11:20:23]
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Re: ghost whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterat_Zool on Saturday, 30th June 2007 @ 07:41:43 PM AEST
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Weirdly inspiring... i've written poems before about night in the woods and occult activities and stuff, but never like this. Reminds me of the adam and eve story, with kind of a sci-fi element overlaid. I dunno, hard to describe, but it makes me want to write one of my own. Well done.

BZ.

Re: ghost whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 04:13:37 AM AEST
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A truly haunting invitation full of a mysterious and yet totaly inticing event. Well done.
What a quality you speak of - when you give it that mystery of a place to meet were they know each others soul.

Re: ghost whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 08:55:44 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful !!!

~D~

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